Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

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Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby Geoff on Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:02 am

These were taken a bit later on in the evening, again at Whale Beach.
Off camera flash was used (thanks Wocka for being a great assistant):

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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby sirhc55 on Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:22 am

First up, congratulations Belinda and Geoff (sorry I could not be there on the day).

#1 - Sea is not straight. Lighting too harsh. Closer with WA lens would have given more impact.

#2 - See #1

#3 - See #1

#4 - Lighting is far too harsh and too directional

#5 - Sea still not straight but the best of the five shots as the subject fills the frame more
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby Ant on Fri Nov 28, 2008 10:29 am

:agree: In both these and the last set, one or two "artistic" shots with the horizon off looks good, but across these two series it looks like the photog was on a lean all day. As a set I think this starts to detract from some otherwise excellent shots.

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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby chrisk on Fri Nov 28, 2008 11:02 am

agree about the horizons, needs a little straightening. otherwise i will have to disagree with chris here for a change. i think the lighting is superb. i think its supposed to be vivid and contrasty so the lighting suits what i think the mood actually is.

the only slight issue i have with #1 is the pose. looks like she's pulling away and you're chasing here down. now, that may be the case in real life but i think the pose in #2 is sensational. great set.
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby aim54x on Fri Nov 28, 2008 11:11 am

#4 and #5 are my favourites but that horizon in #5 does have to be straightened and the directional light in #4 could be softened up a little.

Looks like you were in capable hands though.
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby macka on Fri Nov 28, 2008 3:25 pm

Love the colour and drama of the first few....Wow! You guys look great - Bel is beautiful! :D
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby Reschsmooth on Sat Nov 29, 2008 12:29 pm

Geoff, I think Grant has really done wonders with the amazing sunset that you had that afternoon. I really like the use of flash in these, sure, slightly softer light would have been nice, but, to me, that is only a small niggle in otherwise fantastic shots (yeah, I do agree with previous comments about the horizon).

Also, it would have looked better if you had a great big Mo!!! :lol:
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby surenj on Sat Nov 29, 2008 1:44 pm

These are brilliant! I didn't even notice the horizon issue until it was pointed out. Great use of off camera flash. I would be chuffed have these as my wedding photos.
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby Alex on Sat Nov 29, 2008 4:53 pm

Fantastic photos. Congratulations to you and Belinda!

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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby Glen on Sat Nov 29, 2008 6:04 pm

Geoff very impressive and you will have some great memories. PS Who was the company which took them? :lol:
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby karenkwan on Mon Dec 01, 2008 3:45 pm

#1 and #2 are absolutely stunning :D
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby whoalse on Sat Dec 06, 2008 10:28 am

I love the lighting but I have to agree with some of the comments here in relation to the horizon not being straight.

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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby ozimax on Sat Dec 06, 2008 1:02 pm

Excellent images Geoff at the right time of day for such things. (I shot a wedding a few weeks back at midday and it was a headache at times with the glare).

As for the second, your missus must be very flexible... :D

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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby devilla101 on Mon Dec 15, 2008 8:55 pm

Wow, I love the strong orange color you capture on that shoot. Great lighting and composition!

Did you underexpose for the sky to get those saturated colors or in PP?
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby Geoff on Tue Dec 16, 2008 12:01 am

Thanks Devilla - the light was indeed amazing!
I'm not sure what our photog did for the sky, but I think there has been a moderate amount of PP on these, that said we are still very happy with them and I don't think he's pushed them too far.
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby devilla101 on Tue Dec 16, 2008 8:24 am

No doubt dude, the photos are amazing!
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby muzz on Tue Dec 16, 2008 2:54 pm

Great images - they have an immediate impact, and I'm sure will still evoke great memories in years to come. Are you going to have a go at the current TTD (Trash The Dress) fad?
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby Geoff on Tue Dec 16, 2008 3:32 pm

muzz wrote: Are you going to have a go at the current TTD (Trash The Dress) fad?


Absolutely not :)
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby Reschsmooth on Tue Dec 16, 2008 3:47 pm

Geoff wrote:
muzz wrote: Are you going to have a go at the current TTD (Trash The Dress) fad?


Absolutely not :)


Geoff looks bad enough in a dry dress, let alone a wet, white one! :twisted: :twisted:
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby jdear on Wed Dec 17, 2008 10:58 am

Hey Geoff - congratulations - your photos look fantastic and you guys look really good together :)
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby muzz on Wed Dec 17, 2008 12:14 pm

Geoff wrote:
Absolutely not :)


Hey Geoff you're married now, aren't these things "joint" decisions now?? :P
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby gstark on Wed Dec 17, 2008 12:16 pm

muzz wrote:
Geoff wrote:
Absolutely not :)


Hey Geoff you're married now, aren't these things "joint" decisions now?? :P


Bel doesn't want to see him in a dress either. :)
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Re: Our wedding - the pro shots Part 2

Postby Reschsmooth on Wed Dec 17, 2008 3:56 pm

muzz wrote:
Geoff wrote:
Absolutely not :)


Hey Geoff you're married now, aren't these things "joint" decisions now?? :P


Since when have the terms "married" and "joint decisions" ever existed in the same sentenc without being qualified by the phrase "never again"? :D :D
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