Old Farm Shed

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Old Farm Shed

Postby J.Davis on Fri Jan 16, 2009 5:54 pm

Out touring yesterday and came across this disused farm building - comments?

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Inside was a treasure trove

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Re: Old Farm Shed

Postby stubbsy on Fri Jan 16, 2009 7:33 pm

John

I really like the images, but not the processing. The first one is too saturated - to me an old shed should look rusty and run down which clashes with the "youthful" vibrance you've given it. The others are all a bit orange/yellow which makes me wonder if your white balance was out.

Of course if this was your intent then that's your choice (you are the artist after all) and you can ignore these comments (plus ee my tagline below :wink: )

Discounting my comments about processing the standout for me is the third image since there is so much lovely detail for the eyes to feast on
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Re: Old Farm Shed

Postby J.Davis on Fri Jan 16, 2009 10:41 pm

The first image is straight out of the camera - the shed is painted a red colour but is rusty inside. The rusty colour in the other pics is softened (with pse7) as they where too rusty red.
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Re: Old Farm Shed

Postby aim54x on Fri Jan 16, 2009 10:51 pm

#2 is my favourite, it has great lines and I really like the use of the panel as framing for the inside. The others dont do too much for me though.
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Re: Old Farm Shed

Postby Big V on Fri Jan 16, 2009 11:20 pm

These would be a good candidates for a monochrome series. What a great find.
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