Water Painting

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Water Painting

Postby jethro on Wed Jan 21, 2009 1:51 pm

Long time no post here I go. What are the thoughts of my peers here?
I was reasonably happy in low light hand held and slow shutter. This also had no touch up at all. It had a smooth painted feel to the wave.

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Re: Water Painting

Postby aim54x on Wed Jan 21, 2009 2:06 pm

Absolutely amazing photo!
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Re: Water Painting

Postby MATT on Wed Jan 21, 2009 2:22 pm

It does have a painted feel. I wonder if it would be good printed on canvas??


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Re: Water Painting

Postby Reschsmooth on Wed Jan 21, 2009 2:48 pm

Fantastic. Print big.
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Re: Water Painting

Postby Alpha_7 on Wed Jan 21, 2009 3:57 pm

I really like the affect, but there is a little voice in my head that would suggest a crop off the left hand side to remove some of the blown whitewash.
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Re: Water Painting

Postby colin_12 on Wed Jan 21, 2009 7:58 pm

:agree:
This is food for thought.
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Re: Water Painting

Postby blacknstormy on Wed Jan 21, 2009 10:41 pm

I really like this :) But I have a different view of the crop - yes, I think it needs a crop, but I actually like the blown highlights on the left - I want to get rid of the dark band across the top of the shot - jmho :)
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Re: Water Painting

Postby Geoff M on Thu Jan 22, 2009 9:20 am

blacknstormy wrote:I really like this :) But I have a different view of the crop - yes, I think it needs a crop, but I actually like the blown highlights on the left - I want to get rid of the dark band across the top of the shot - jmho :)


I agree, making this crop would also get rid of one of your dust bunnies. Before you print there are also another three DB's in the lower left corner which need claening up. Great work.
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Re: Water Painting

Postby jethro on Thu Jan 22, 2009 4:06 pm

Thanks for the comments I'll take it on board!
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