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Single shot for critique
In a recent post of some flower shots I was (rightly) chastised for my formulaic, neat and in the middle composition. That set me the challenge of avoiding such a trap. Here is the result of my attempts to maintain focus on the main flower, but without a neat and in the middle composition. I'd appreciate your comments.
Peter
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Well I haven't seen your earlier shots that got the ribbing, but I'd prefer the bottom flower to be cropped so it was neat and in the middle. I find this current shot uncomfortable as you have various subjects viaing for attention, the two in focus flowers, the bug and the out of focus flower.
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The colour tone in this is lovely Peter. The image feels soft while the subject is sharp.
How did you manage that? Regards Colin
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