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Modern Art

Postby zafra52 on Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:09 pm

I took this picture a few weeks ago. The image is of a modern scupture in the shape of a ball with tube shapes radiating from it - like the rays from the Sun. It was made of some kind of chrome metal reflecting and distorting its environment. I positioned myself at the centre. What do you think?

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Re: Modern Art

Postby stubbsy on Sun Mar 22, 2009 3:48 pm

This works a treat - especially since there is so much great detail in the reflections of the rest of the space around the object and you.
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Re: Modern Art

Postby zafra52 on Sun Mar 22, 2009 4:04 pm

Thank you. I am glad you liked it.
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Re: Modern Art

Postby leek on Sun Mar 22, 2009 5:56 pm

I love it...

Where was this taken?
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Re: Modern Art

Postby zafra52 on Mon Mar 23, 2009 5:19 pm

It was taken at a exhibition in the Palacio de Cristal (Glass Palace) in the Parque del Retiro (Retiro Park) in Madrid (Spain). There were several pieces like it and I managed to take them before the caretaker warned me that photographs were not allowed.
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Re: Modern Art

Postby photoaffinity on Mon Mar 23, 2009 6:18 pm

i like it!
the way the lines of the (roof?) curve and dance around makes this a really interesting one to look at.
great capture!
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Re: Modern Art

Postby NeoTiger on Mon Mar 23, 2009 7:29 pm

Very interesting structure, nice capture :)
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Re: Modern Art

Postby surenj on Mon Mar 23, 2009 9:44 pm

Great capture!
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Re: Modern Art

Postby Big V on Tue Mar 24, 2009 7:44 pm

Love it and having you in the picture adds to the sense of scale..
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