Mt Cook

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Mt Cook

Postby zafra52 on Sun May 17, 2009 2:13 pm

I took this picture of Mt Cook (NZ) with a compact digital camera last year.

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Re: Mt Cook

Postby biggerry on Sun May 17, 2009 6:27 pm

Looks like you had a nice day for it and nailed it during a break in the clouds! Can I suggest cropping from the bottom to remove some of that darker area and make it into a pano style? just a thought but its still a quinessential NZ shot.
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Re: Mt Cook

Postby surenj on Mon May 18, 2009 12:54 pm

Good ol NZ! It hasn't changed a bit :wink:

Nice capture and I would agree with Gerry's suggestion with cropping. If not, try to bring out a little detail in the dark if possible.
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Re: Mt Cook

Postby Mr Darcy on Mon May 18, 2009 4:00 pm

Good ol NZ! It hasn't changed a bit

Yes it has. Mt Cook is smaller than it was the last time I saw it in the flesh :lol:
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Re: Mt Cook

Postby zafra52 on Mon May 18, 2009 7:10 pm

As suggested above:

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Re: Mt Cook

Postby Mr Darcy on Tue May 19, 2009 11:43 am

A great improvement. Though now I would like to see more saturation in the sky as well. Bring out some of that cloud detail. Maybe a mask along the horizon line & just play with the sky. It needs to be subltle though. Too much and you will lose the sense of reality.
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Re: Mt Cook

Postby zafra52 on Tue May 19, 2009 7:47 pm

The new one:

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Re: Mt Cook

Postby big pix on Tue May 19, 2009 8:27 pm

great capture....... but where are the skiers
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Re: Mt Cook

Postby zafra52 on Tue May 19, 2009 10:26 pm

Thank you, but they were all away having a cup of coffee. :)
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Re: Mt Cook

Postby bago100 on Wed May 20, 2009 10:29 pm

Hi Zafra

Looking at the differences between the three images of the same photograph, it is amazing how much difference a little crop and a little sky saturation can make.

You have turned a typical NZ photograph into a really good NZ photograph thanks to some learned advice from fellow members

Well done to you and to them

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Re: Mt Cook

Postby surenj on Thu May 21, 2009 11:35 pm

Mr Darcy wrote: much and you will lose the sense of reality.


I reckon you could get away with some extreme editing :P NZ is unreal.
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Re: Mt Cook

Postby zafra52 on Sun May 24, 2009 2:38 pm

Thank you all for your advice and input. Generally, I prefer to do as little editing as possible to keep the images as close as possible to the originals. This is mainly due to the fact that my knowledge and skills in post-processing are fairly limited.
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