Some Insects

Got a thin skin? Then look elsewhere. Post a link to an image that you've made, and invite others to offer their critiques. Honesty is encouraged, but please be positive in your constructive criticism. Flaming and just plain nastiness will not be tolerated. Please note that this is not an area for you to showcase your images, nor is this a place for you to show-off where you have been. This is an area for you to post images so that you may share with us a technique that you have mastered, or are trying to master. Typically, no more than about four images should be posted in any one post or thread, and the maximum size of any side of any image should not exceed 950 px.

Moderators: Greg B, Nnnnsic, Geoff, Glen, gstark, Moderators

Forum rules
Please note that image critiquing is a matter of give and take: if you post images for critique, and you then expect to receive criticism, then it is also reasonable, fair and appropriate that, in return, you post your critique of the images of other members here as a matter of courtesy. So please do offer your critique of the images of others; your opinion is important, and will help everyone here enjoy their visit to far greater extent.

Also please note that, unless you state something to the contrary, other members might attempt to repost your image with their own post processing applied. We see this as an acceptable form of critique, but should you prefer that others not modify your work, this is perfectly ok, and you should state this, either within your post, or within your signature.

Images posted here should conform with the general forum guidelines. Image sizes should not exceed 950 pixels along the largest side (height or width) and typically no more than four images per post or thread.

Please also ensure that you have a meaningful location included in your profile. Please refer to the FAQ for details of what "meaningful" is.

Some Insects

Postby colin_12 on Mon May 18, 2009 5:33 pm

Here are a couple of recent shots for critique.

Cabbage butterfly
Image

A crop from Above.

Image

A fly for good measure.

Image

Would like opinion on colour hue and brightness as well as general crit.
Regards Colin
Cameras, lenses and a lust for life
User avatar
colin_12
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1853
Joined: Thu Jan 04, 2007 7:10 pm
Location: Hazelbrook

Re: Some Insects

Postby zafra52 on Mon May 18, 2009 7:14 pm

Good macro photography, but they are hideous creatures.
User avatar
zafra52
Senior Member
 
Posts: 4827
Joined: Thu Dec 01, 2005 10:22 pm
Location: Brisbane

Re: Some Insects

Postby biggerry on Mon May 18, 2009 8:42 pm

ohh yeah, love them water droplets...hang on, are they water or is it taking a very large leak (jk) :shock:

I love the way the speckled wings match the speckles in the eyes on the second! They all have great detail and dof. Nice work colin :cheers:
gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
User avatar
biggerry
Senior Member
 
Posts: 5930
Joined: Tue May 13, 2008 12:40 am
Location: Under the flight path, Newtown, Sydney

Re: Some Insects

Postby johnmc on Mon May 18, 2009 8:56 pm

Colours and brightness look great to me - still plenty of definition in the shadow areas too :)

I'm curious to know what sort of gear (in particular lens(es) & lighting) you've used for these shots as I'm keen to improve on my macro 'skills'
Canon EOS50D, 17-40mm f4 L USM, 24-105mm f4 L IS USM, 50mm f1.4 USM, 28-80mm f3.5-5.6, 70-300mm f4-5.6 & various other bits ;)
my flickr photostream
User avatar
johnmc
Member
 
Posts: 64
Joined: Sun May 17, 2009 11:45 pm
Location: Narre Warren South

Re: Some Insects

Postby surenj on Tue May 19, 2009 12:27 am

johnmc wrote:I'm curious to know what sort of gear (in particular lens(es) & lighting) you've used for these shots as I'm keen to improve on my macro 'skills'


Dude check out Colin's exif's. He is kind enough to include them. His meager kit consists of a D700, 100mm ?2.8 macro and a large (compared to the subject) light source. But then the gear is not all that important though. Learning to use what you have is more important IMO.

Colin nice shots! Do you hand hold flash and camera at the same time?
User avatar
surenj
Senior Member
 
Posts: 7197
Joined: Fri Sep 15, 2006 8:21 pm
Location: Artarmon NSW

Re: Some Insects

Postby colin_12 on Tue May 19, 2009 1:53 am

Thanks fellas,

John, I use the gear Surenj mentioned. My light source is an sb 600 with a home made cardboard soft box. (search ATJ's posts to find detailed instructions on these) I am yet to make the fold up version.

Surenj, I am lazy so the flash is just in the camera hot shoe while I run around and take shots. To lazy for tripod since I started to use flash for lighting. :oops:
Regards Colin
Cameras, lenses and a lust for life
User avatar
colin_12
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1853
Joined: Thu Jan 04, 2007 7:10 pm
Location: Hazelbrook

Re: Some Insects

Postby chrisk on Tue May 19, 2009 7:45 am

great detail and colour in the first colin. very nice shot.
EM1 l 7.5 l 12-40 l 14 l 17 l 25 l 45 l 60 l 75 l AW1 l V3
User avatar
chrisk
Senior Member
 
Posts: 3317
Joined: Fri Mar 09, 2007 8:50 pm
Location: Oyster Bay, Sydney

Re: Some Insects

Postby ATJ on Tue May 19, 2009 4:07 pm

Great shots, Colin. How are you managing to find any insects with this cold weather?

The first one loses a bit because the wings are cut off by the foreground leaf (and the hindwing is slightly torn) but the water drops add interest. It is certainly nice and sharp.

The fly could probably be a tad lighter in the shaded areas (d-lighting in Capture NX or Fill Light in Lightroom).
User avatar
ATJ
Senior Member
 
Posts: 3982
Joined: Fri Feb 18, 2005 10:44 am
Location: Blue Mountains, NSW

Re: Some Insects

Postby surenj on Tue May 19, 2009 6:47 pm

colin_12 wrote:
Surenj, I am lazy so the flash is just in the camera hot shoe while I run around and take shots. To lazy for tripod since I started to use flash for lighting. :oops:


Tell you what, I can't really tell that's it's on-camera flash. I suppose it's kind like flash from above when you take into account the subject to lens distance as well as subject size. any ideas on this matter? Does it really matter whether the flash is on or off camera? [or one of those ring macro flashes?] I suppose the latter may provide wrap around lighting that's more even?
User avatar
surenj
Senior Member
 
Posts: 7197
Joined: Fri Sep 15, 2006 8:21 pm
Location: Artarmon NSW

Re: Some Insects

Postby colin_12 on Tue May 19, 2009 10:49 pm

Hello Andrew, I only found a couple mate, or is the answer like kiwi's find sheep in the long grass? :wink:
Yes I would have liked to have all of her wings in the shot but those that do are the wrong angle to have the lot in focus.
I have already lightened up the shaded areas of the fly a tad. Maybe I could push this a little more.

Surenj, it does matter depending upon what you are trying to acheive with the lighting. I don't think that I am being overly creative with my lighting arangement. But for my subject in this instance I don't think it needs creativity. Shooting other subjects like people on the other hand looks to really benefit from creative lighting. Not my area at all.
I have an old ring flash that I have not used for some time as it is not as powerful as the on board flash and thus reduces the depth I can obtain. It would have been great for some of the fungi shots that I have taken of late, but not all. Ring flash can also leave the subject looking a bit flat as you do not have much or any shadow to gve definition.
Next time we are going to the same meet remind me to bring it along for you to try.
Regards Colin
Cameras, lenses and a lust for life
User avatar
colin_12
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1853
Joined: Thu Jan 04, 2007 7:10 pm
Location: Hazelbrook

Re: Some Insects

Postby ATJ on Wed May 20, 2009 2:21 am

surenj wrote:[or one of those ring macro flashes?] I suppose the latter may provide wrap around lighting that's more even?

I personally don't like the look of images taken with a ring flash mainly because it produces an unnatural light typically with no specific source and no shadows. With a soft box (like the one Colin is using) you still get directional lighting. The shadows are still there but they are softened.
User avatar
ATJ
Senior Member
 
Posts: 3982
Joined: Fri Feb 18, 2005 10:44 am
Location: Blue Mountains, NSW


Return to Image Reviews and Critiques