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Water

Postby surenj on Fri Jul 03, 2009 1:26 am

I got some pointers from the Hasselblad fella in PMA photographing water. He had an umbrella as background (key) and bare strobe from below (?as fill). Seamless background completed the picture.

I thought I'd replicate that at home. Well not quite.... :wink:

Here is the result. Critique as always, much appreciated.

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Here is the setup. I had to use the Hasselblad to photograph this so you can't see it. :mrgreen:

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Re: Water

Postby gstark on Fri Jul 03, 2009 8:53 am

But you don't explain the purpose of the Coco Pops box ?????
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Re: Water

Postby Mr Darcy on Fri Jul 03, 2009 9:12 am

I had to use the Hasselblad to photograph this so you can't see it.

You'll have to get another one just to photograph your setups. :lol:
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Re: Water

Postby biggerry on Fri Jul 03, 2009 9:58 am

thats awesome surenj, i am gonna go home and have a crack at that! at first when looking at the image i got the impression it was crooked, however in fact its due to the shape of the vase - I also like the tint, great stuff :up:

But you don't explain the purpose of the Coco Pops box ?????


mmmmm cocopops, gees Gary, clearly its quality product placement, surenj has shares in Kellogs (do they make cocopops?) :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
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Re: Water

Postby Mr Darcy on Fri Jul 03, 2009 10:59 am

clearly its quality product placement,

What? Next to the garbage bin?
Still it IS Coco Pops so I guess that's appropriate. BTW, I forgot to say earlier. Great photo, but maybe an extra light on the background to ensure it's all white
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Re: Water

Postby surenj on Fri Jul 03, 2009 7:07 pm

Thanks for your comments guys.

I have tried answer your quesions as much as I can... :mrgreen:

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No Cocopops were hurt in this production.

Does anyone know why the reflection is somewhat blurred? OOF or diffraction from the thick hardened glass on this table?
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Re: Water

Postby aim54x on Fri Jul 03, 2009 8:32 pm

Nice photo, thanks for the setup...it will make it easier for my to copy and try for myself!
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Re: Water

Postby DanW on Fri Jul 03, 2009 9:27 pm

Great shot. Going to try it now too....

surenj wrote:Does anyone know why the reflection is somewhat blurred? OOF or diffraction from the thick hardened glass on this table?


I think there's two things here. Firstly, the table almost certainly isn't flat so there'd be a bit of a wave there. Secondly, I think there's also a second reflection from the bottom surface of the table. If memory serves, ordinary glass reflects about 4% at each interface so that could be it.
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Re: Water

Postby colin_12 on Sat Jul 04, 2009 11:49 am

Of course the Coco pops are essential nutrition. That's what all Dr's tell us right?
I like this Surenj. It shows us a result as well as showing everyone where to start. Fantastic.
I like the reflection regardless of the clarity issue you feel you have.
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Re: Water

Postby surenj on Sat Jul 04, 2009 6:30 pm

Thanks Dan and Colin. i think you are right colin. There may be slightly overlapping reflections. Hmm.. I wonder what will happen with a polariser in the lens or flash :idea: I am not sure about the levelness of the picture. I tried for a long time to level it out in photoshop. There seems to be a 1.3 degree discrepancy which I can't seem to correct. When I do correct it, it looks crooked! Go figure.

Colin, this is not a new idea. See the STROBIST for more details. This can 'almost' be done with flash on camera! I tried it a few times but could reduce the flash power down significantly when it's close (inverse square blah blah..)

I would never recommend COCOPOPs as essential for anyone. Considering the circumstances it was essential for me. BTW I keep it in the fridge :shock: i am dealing with a flour weevil infestation at the moment.
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Re: Water

Postby colin_12 on Sat Jul 04, 2009 8:10 pm

I know how you feel. We have had a pantry moth infestation this year.
They are most irritating to say the least.
To many organic products in there!
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Re: Water

Postby biggerry on Sat Jul 04, 2009 8:22 pm

 BTW I keep it in the fridge i am dealing with a flour weevil infestation at the moment.


yeah been there done that too...a real pain in the ass - best to start with all new stuff and get lots of tupperware containers!

That's what all Dr's tell us right?


I was trying to convince the petti-coat giverment that a doc had said cocopops were essential, but alas, i still have no cocopops...

Thats for teh illustration Surenj, very helpful, however whats with the horse sized syringe there?
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Re: Water

Postby surenj on Mon Jul 06, 2009 12:13 am

biggerry wrote:horse sized syringe

Gerry I was trying using a faster water stream...
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