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nighttime ford fairmont

Postby auxr8220 on Wed Jul 15, 2009 5:58 pm

some more lightpainting shots, i think this location is the best to date

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iso400, 50mm, f/11, 30 secs

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i got some "ghosts" in this one but i still like the photo
iso400, 50mm, f/11, 30 secs

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iso400, 50mm, f/11,36 secs

and a muck-a-round one to finish it off edited in photochop, 2 photos one with bonnet down layered over the one with bonnet up. remove bonnet and PRESTO a car no bonnet :D

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iso400, 50mm, f/11, 35secs
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Re: nighttime ford fairmont

Postby Glen on Wed Jul 15, 2009 7:05 pm

Nice images and smart technique to get the no bonnet look without spanners
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Re: nighttime ford fairmont

Postby gstark on Wed Jul 15, 2009 10:09 pm

auxr8220 wrote:some more lightpainting shots, i think this location is the best to date


:agree:

and a muck-a-round one to finish it off edited in photochop, 2 photos one with bonnet down layered over the one with bonnet up. remove bonnet and PRESTO a car no bonnet


Nicely done. This image has worked very well.
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Re: nighttime ford fairmont

Postby aim54x on Wed Jul 15, 2009 10:27 pm

Glen wrote:Nice images and smart technique to get the no bonnet look without spanners


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Re: nighttime ford fairmont

Postby sheepie on Wed Jul 15, 2009 10:42 pm

Really like this style, and admire the effort to get the images :)

I think the last one might be a bit more striking if the windows were down. I think that would go nicely with the 'nude' with no bonnet :)
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Re: nighttime ford fairmont

Postby ian.bertram on Thu Jul 16, 2009 12:40 am

Really nice work and a technique I haven't tried. Could you come round and make my 1994 Fairmont look like that (it may take more than some expensive glass I fear).
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Re: nighttime ford fairmont

Postby biggerry on Thu Jul 16, 2009 12:53 am

Great looking images, its good to see how your car shots of this style have improved over your recent posts.. :up: :up:

Looking at these images makes me want to go out and give it a crack, I agree this is quite a good location and excellent work on the last image, as sheepie says, windows down would also help...

smart technique to get the no bonnet look without spanners

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you come round and make my 1994 Fairmont look like that


I know how ya feel, I might have to actually do the annual wash before i try this at home! :wink: :wink:
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Re: nighttime ford fairmont

Postby auxr8220 on Thu Jul 16, 2009 7:29 am

cheers for the feedback,

i havnt tried it with the windows down but i will definately give it a go next time im free and we have some nice wheather to play with.

im looking at getting another lens when i get my tax money back something like a sigma 20mm f/1.8 or a canon 28mm f/1.8. this will enable me to get closer to the cars especially for a group shot.

im glad you all like them, best bit about this spot is it is a central location being only 2km out of CBD took me long enough to find a decent location without going bush.
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Re: nighttime ford fairmont

Postby surenj on Thu Jul 16, 2009 1:10 pm

Nicely done! You would be giving Tangcla run for his money!

Love the bonnet off shot. You can still improve your editing on the edges. I can vaguely see some blurry edges. Which tool did you use to select? Pen?
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Re: nighttime ford fairmont

Postby auxr8220 on Sat Jul 18, 2009 7:43 am

are you talking about the edge's where i have taken the bonnet off? my photoshop is a pain sometimes and the lassoo tool acts like it has ended by itself sometimes. this was one of those times so i cut it out really fast.

here is a pic with no lighting but same settings. straight of the camera i might run it in lightroom and give it the same treatment i did to my edited picture. but this just shows how dark the location is.

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Re: nighttime ford fairmont

Postby aim54x on Sun Jul 19, 2009 12:11 am

wow the non painted/edited image looks very different. How long does it take to get your image from out of camera to what your posting??
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Re: nighttime ford fairmont

Postby auxr8220 on Sun Jul 19, 2009 1:32 am

each photo has about 30 seconds to a minute worth of editing, i dont like doing too much to the image.

i used lightroom, and in that i normally do the following

white balance- till im happy with the colour (im using a led light that puts out a bluish light, so they need to be warmed up a tad)

then i scroll down and adjust exposure, blacks, brightness and contrast and clarity till i am happy with it.

after that i give it a slight sharpen and bump noise reduction up to about 90.

thats it for lightroom then it goes into photoshop to be resized for the web.

here is an original from the camera with lighting

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and just to show the difference

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