People in the pool with palms (Sophie goes underwater)

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People in the pool with palms (Sophie goes underwater)

Postby Willy wombat on Tue Aug 04, 2009 3:57 pm

From my recent trip to Darwin

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A bit of creative PP to play with a high contrasting effect in #1

Im fast learning that lighting people underwater isnt as easy as fish. Skin tones are hard to manage.

Both shot using D200, 17-55mm and underwater strobes.
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Re: People in the pool with palms (Sophie goes underwater)

Postby chrisk on Tue Aug 04, 2009 8:40 pm

#1 rocks man. i love the surface water patterns, the hair and the composition.
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Re: People in the pool with palms (Sophie goes underwater)

Postby Bob G on Tue Aug 04, 2009 8:47 pm

Clever Shots
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Postby sirhc55 on Tue Aug 04, 2009 9:12 pm

I like both but prefer the face from #2 with the composition and treatment of #1.
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Re: People in the pool with palms (Sophie goes underwater)

Postby Willy wombat on Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:14 pm

Rooz wrote:#1 rocks man. i love the surface water patterns, the hair and the composition.


Hey thanks - Hair goes crazy underwater. Getting the models to open their eyes and not blow bubbles is normally a challenge at first but they get used to it fairly quickly.

I just wish I had access to a heated pool down here in melbourne so I could do a bit more practice. This one had to wait until I got to Darwin!
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Re: People in the pool with palms (Sophie goes underwater)

Postby Willy wombat on Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:21 pm

Bob G wrote:Clever Shots


Thanks Bob - Was a fun shoot
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Re: People in the pool with palms (Sophie goes underwater)

Postby jaff on Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:38 pm

Haunting shots, its their eyes I think..the water disturbance on (1) draws the eye!
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Postby aim54x on Tue Aug 04, 2009 11:49 pm

interesting work....those eyes are quite captivating. Shame you have to go so far to get those shots, i would like to see more
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Re: People in the pool with palms (Sophie goes underwater)

Postby Willy wombat on Wed Aug 05, 2009 6:21 pm

aim54x wrote:interesting work....those eyes are quite captivating. Shame you have to go so far to get those shots, i would like to see more


Plenty of interest from the model fraternity but alas too cold. Hopefully more in a few months whent he waters warm up (or i find someone with an indoor pool).
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Re: People in the pool with palms (Sophie goes underwater)

Postby zafra52 on Wed Aug 05, 2009 7:09 pm

#1 rocks man. i love the surface water patterns, the hair and the composition.


I think the second can also benefit with a touch up, but yes I guess underwater photography of people would be a real challenge. I won't try myself because a) I don't want my equipment wet and b) I can't swim. :oops: Great work!
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Re: People in the pool with palms (Sophie goes underwater)

Postby Oz_Beachside on Wed Aug 05, 2009 7:47 pm

interesting to see steve.

i hadnt thought about missing catchlights, I guess the reflection of the eye is a little diferent when submerged... losing that eye contact.

i recall watching a tog shoot an underwater fashion shoot through a glass/perspex tank, which would be warmer :D
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Re: People in the pool with palms (Sophie goes underwater)

Postby marcotrov on Wed Aug 05, 2009 9:43 pm

Very creative and surreal Steve. Both eye catching but #1 tends to be more so for me. You certainly are not left guessing what the subject is at all. :wink:
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Re: People in the pool with palms (Sophie goes underwater)

Postby surenj on Wed Aug 05, 2009 10:51 pm

Very interesting indeed! Very unique type of portraiture...
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