Flower Macros

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Flower Macros

Postby CraigVTR on Wed Aug 05, 2009 6:49 pm

Bix Pix recent macros inspired me to hit the garden this morning to get some shots of the Bird of Paradise, something I have been going to do for the last twelve months. Thanks Bernie for the motivation.

Here are a couple. These were shot through dappled light this morning with higher iso to try and get some dof, then a breeze started blowing. aaarrrrrh. Give me some feedback especially on the noise.
Thanks

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I have a narrow bit of wall in my office were this would hang nicely.
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A couple more in this gallery if you are interested. http://craigvtr.smugmug.com/Flowers
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Re: Flower Macros

Postby chrisk on Wed Aug 05, 2009 7:39 pm

#3 is as good a flower image as i have seen anywhere, anytime. the composition is original and the colours are spectacular. well done mate, you should be very proud of that.
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Re: Flower Macros

Postby sirhc55 on Wed Aug 05, 2009 8:00 pm

#1 Masterful
#2 Masterful
#3 Masterful
#4 Masterful

What else can I say :up:
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Re: Flower Macros

Postby gstark on Wed Aug 05, 2009 8:14 pm

#2 has got me.

Composition is spot on. Colours are brilliant. Sharp as a tack.
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Re: Flower Macros

Postby colin_12 on Wed Aug 05, 2009 8:56 pm

Cool,
If you want to reduce the noise, especially wth darker backgrounds, the blur tool in ps or other software works a treat.
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Re: Flower Macros

Postby aim54x on Wed Aug 05, 2009 9:22 pm

Very interesting and very attractive! Keep up the good work mate!
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Re: Flower Macros

Postby surenj on Wed Aug 05, 2009 10:24 pm

Holy carp! The 2# is masterful!! we are not worthy.... :bowdown:
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Re: Flower Macros

Postby biggerry on Wed Aug 05, 2009 11:14 pm

A very nice series of images! The third one is a favorite for me, this would be ideal laminated and used as a bookmark! the image, I think, really would lend itself to this kind of application.

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Re: Flower Macros

Postby jaff on Thu Aug 06, 2009 12:17 am

1 Ooh
2 Ooh
3 OOH YEH real nice
4 Ooh
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Re: Flower Macros

Postby CraigVTR on Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:15 am

Thanks guys you have encouraged me to print up the narrow crop.

I might just investigate the bookmark idea as well. Biggerry, thank you.
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Re: Flower Macros

Postby ATJ on Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:21 am

I like them all.

The first one suffers from a little too much contrast.

The composition of the second one is fantastic but the image suffers from the noise as you mentioned.

I especially like the 3rd one and agree it would make a great bookmark.

For me, the 4th is the weakest of them. I find the large unsharp areas a bit distracting.
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