Hard Life

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Hard Life

Postby craig.rohse on Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:01 pm

Here is one of my favorites!
Used a gradient black and white conversion with a 20% gausian blur mask.

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Re: Hard Life

Postby Big V on Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:11 pm

A really effective conversion
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Re: Hard Life

Postby ian.bertram on Thu Aug 06, 2009 10:30 pm

The eyes are so dark and foreboding- it's like they see something in the viewer. Black and white is so provocative. Great shot.
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Re: Hard Life

Postby biggerry on Fri Aug 07, 2009 1:15 am

That is certianly one very nice shot and a treatment that really works,

...ramblings start...
I read the title to the post then looked at the image (bleeding obvious..), however this (the title) really affected the way i percieved the image, i then thought more about it and thought of other titles and how they would influence me when looking at the image, i guess what I am gettign at is teh choice of title can really be used to influence the viewer, this probably obvious to all, however this image did get me thinging alittle more than normal.. and for that..thanks :roll:
ramblings finish...

great picture and serious eyebrows :cheers:
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Re: Hard Life

Postby norwest on Fri Aug 07, 2009 11:27 am

Nice subject full of character you captured very well craig. It's easy to see why it's one of your favorites.
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Re: Hard Life

Postby darklightphotography on Fri Aug 07, 2009 5:11 pm

What a great shot!
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Re: Hard Life

Postby Matt. K on Fri Aug 07, 2009 6:18 pm

An outstanding portrait! It sings in every way!
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Re: Hard Life

Postby zafra52 on Fri Aug 07, 2009 6:46 pm

An outstanding portrait! It sings in every way!


You've done well! It looks as if this poor man has seen more suffering and toil than his fair share. This is a good example of what photography is all about - the subject.
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Re: Hard Life

Postby adame on Sat Aug 08, 2009 9:47 am

What an excellent portrait :up:

The conversion to B&W has really made this image.
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Re: Hard Life

Postby craig.rohse on Mon Aug 10, 2009 4:59 pm

biggerry wrote:That is certianly one very nice shot and a treatment that really works,

...ramblings start...
I read the title to the post then looked at the image (bleeding obvious..), however this (the title) really affected the way i percieved the image, i then thought more about it and thought of other titles and how they would influence me when looking at the image, i guess what I am gettign at is teh choice of title can really be used to influence the viewer, this probably obvious to all, however this image did get me thinging alittle more than normal.. and for that..thanks :roll:
ramblings finish...

great picture and serious eyebrows :cheers:


Thanks for all the Comments I am glad that I am not the only one who likes it :bowdown:

As to you gerry, I was so glad to have the opportunity to take shots of the local Timorese they all tell you a great story and even thou they have got a hard life they are still fun loving people. It really puts my life here in Australia into a different perspective. You are right the title is very important.
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Re: Hard Life

Postby craig.rohse on Mon Aug 10, 2009 5:00 pm

biggerry wrote:That is certianly one very nice shot and a treatment that really works,

...ramblings start...
I read the title to the post then looked at the image (bleeding obvious..), however this (the title) really affected the way i percieved the image, i then thought more about it and thought of other titles and how they would influence me when looking at the image, i guess what I am gettign at is teh choice of title can really be used to influence the viewer, this probably obvious to all, however this image did get me thinging alittle more than normal.. and for that..thanks :roll:
ramblings finish...

great picture and serious eyebrows :cheers:


Thanks for all the Comments I am glad that I am not the only one who likes it :bowdown:

As to you gerry, I was so glad to have the opportunity to take shots of the local Timorese they all tell you a great story and even thou they have got a hard life they are still fun loving people. It really puts my life here in Australia into a different perspective. You are right the title is very important.
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Re: Hard Life

Postby Alpha_7 on Mon Aug 10, 2009 5:28 pm

Hi Craig, it was great meeting you on Saturday (and thansk for the lift), this looks even better on a big screen (compared to Stubbsy's Iphone). Its a great portrait, really captures some essence or spirit the subject. I'd love to learn a bit more abotu your gradient B&W technique and how that works, as I must admit its a new one to me.
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