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Walk Towards...Model: Siona
Cheers, John
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Re: Walk Towards...John,
While I like the framing and composition in this, you have let your quality of work slip here due to the poor wb settings. When you're shooting in open shade, there may be a tendency towards a blue cast in the image, and this needs to be addressed. This is very evident in the shadowed areas of the white dress, as well as in the skin colouration on her legs. I'm almost of the opinion that this image may also be under-exposed, but I'd like to see the wb corrected before I make that call. g.
Gary Stark Nikon, Canon, Bronica .... stuff The people who want English to be the official language of the United States are uncomfortable with their leaders being fluent in it - US Pres. Bartlet
Re: Walk Towards...LOL... You're spot on gary, but sometimes I like to play with WB settings for artistic effect, and this was definitely one of those occasions... I deliberately made it blue and also toned down the exposure and even applied a vignette to give it a darker more moody feel. Cheers, John
Leek@Flickr | Leek@RedBubble | Leek@DeviantArt D700; D200; Tokina 12-24; Nikkor 50mm f1.4,18-70mm,85mm f1.8, 105mm,80-400VR, SB-800s; G1227LVL; RRS BH-55; Feisol 1401
Re: Walk Towards...
Thanks... this was an accidental shot and having seen it in the viewfinder I actually had the model walk along the wall 5 more times, but didn't get quite the same mood / effect that I captured in this first random shot... In this case, neither really... we were trying to capture some moody conceptual images... I'll show you a few more soon when they've been processed...[/quote]
Badly As replied to Gary, I deliberately cooled down the tone of the image... and when I do that the skin tone follows... wasn't attempting tone accuracy here... more a feel to the shot... Cheers, John
Leek@Flickr | Leek@RedBubble | Leek@DeviantArt D700; D200; Tokina 12-24; Nikkor 50mm f1.4,18-70mm,85mm f1.8, 105mm,80-400VR, SB-800s; G1227LVL; RRS BH-55; Feisol 1401
Re: Walk Towards...
Ok ... but I'm left wondering if there perhaps might have been other ways to achieve the darker/moodier feel without turning this beautiful lady into a blue-skinned .... I'm thinking in terms of black point or perhaps matt box, rather than wb .... g.
Gary Stark Nikon, Canon, Bronica .... stuff The people who want English to be the official language of the United States are uncomfortable with their leaders being fluent in it - US Pres. Bartlet
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