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Mustang Light Painting Goodness :-)

Postby dviv on Thu Aug 20, 2009 12:10 pm

Thanks again to Jeremy for providing a beautiful car :bowdown:

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Re: Mustang Light Painting Goodness :-)

Postby surenj on Thu Aug 20, 2009 1:07 pm

I quite like the first. It's an angle I didn't think to take...
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Re: Mustang Light Painting Goodness :-)

Postby aim54x on Thu Aug 20, 2009 1:37 pm

Very nice work there David, I really like #3 but it could do with a bit more light on the far side (hence softbox line in #4). #1 is a stunner! Great angles and beautiful results
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Re: Mustang Light Painting Goodness :-)

Postby jlewis on Thu Aug 20, 2009 2:45 pm

Number 1 and 2 are my favorites. I have a couple of half decent ones to sort through, but you guys are a step above me!
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Re: Mustang Light Painting Goodness :-)

Postby biggerry on Thu Aug 20, 2009 3:15 pm

mmmm, love the first image, great angle there and nice stars in the second! :cheers:
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Re: Mustang Light Painting Goodness :-)

Postby Glen on Thu Aug 20, 2009 8:23 pm

David, nice set. The first is a novel angle which really worked
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Re: Mustang Light Painting Goodness :-)

Postby fozzie on Sat Aug 22, 2009 9:42 am

David - the first one has a magical appeal to me - everything works, very well done.
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Re: Mustang Light Painting Goodness :-)

Postby gstark on Sat Aug 22, 2009 9:55 am

David,

Great work.

In the first, what about cropping some from the top? Perhaps crop to just a little more than the free space you have below the front tyre at the bottom of this image?
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Re: Mustang Light Painting Goodness :-)

Postby Big V on Sat Aug 22, 2009 10:27 pm

Lovely colour in the first one - it really stands out.
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Re: Mustang Light Painting Goodness :-)

Postby colin_12 on Sun Aug 23, 2009 8:02 am

Really nice car.
I agree with Gary on the crop. :cheers:
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