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Posterised shot

Postby barry on Tue Sep 01, 2009 4:12 pm

This is a shot I took in the Hunter Valley last weekend on an overcast afternoon. The original shot was relatively flat so I decided to give it a kick along with a bit of posterisation. What do you think?

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Re: Posterised shot

Postby Big Red on Tue Sep 01, 2009 7:15 pm

came up quite well i think 8)
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Re: Posterised shot

Postby surenj on Wed Sep 02, 2009 4:33 am

What's the processing involved in this posterising business?

My eye is still drawn to the drab sky..wonder what will happen if you add a few subtle streaky clouds... :?:
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Re: Posterised shot

Postby Greg B on Wed Sep 02, 2009 12:11 pm

I think it could use more aggressive posterisation, and I like surenj's suggestion
of some clouds being added.
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Re: Posterised shot

Postby big pix on Wed Sep 02, 2009 1:13 pm

the big tree adds very little other than take up space........ crop above the umbrella, then you have an image.........
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Re: Posterised shot

Postby barry on Wed Sep 02, 2009 3:23 pm

Big Pix this is the cropped version for comparison as you suggested. What do you think?

Surenj, these shots were done using the poster edges filter in CS3. I applied the filter twice.

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Re: Posterised shot

Postby ozimax on Wed Sep 02, 2009 3:31 pm

The partially chopped umbrella is distracting for me, otherwise I'm not sure what posterisation means. :)
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Re: Posterised shot

Postby ian.bertram on Wed Sep 02, 2009 3:39 pm

It's amazing sometimes what difference can make. The crop makes your shot really jump out. I'm usre I've been to this place some time in my travels brickwork and vines just look too familiar.
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Re: Posterised shot

Postby big pix on Wed Sep 02, 2009 3:44 pm

....... much better.... the image has come to life :wink:
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Re: Posterised shot

Postby surenj on Wed Sep 02, 2009 3:49 pm

big pix, GREAT idea with the crop! Much much better. Forget the sky and concentrate on the subject.

I am getting the hang of this posterisation business...looks cartoony.
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Re: Posterised shot

Postby barry on Wed Sep 02, 2009 3:56 pm

Thanks big pix, i like it better than the original also.

Ian, the shots were taken in the little shopping village outside Hunter Valley Gardens.

Heres another one from the same spot.

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