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Wollongong HarbourThese are some images from an outing with one of the local camera clubs. I thought that I'd try something different and limited myself to only using 14mm.
HDR - 5 Images:
Re: Wollongong HarbourSteve,
Great work here. The're all good, but I love the result you've achieved in the first with the stars' visibility contrasting with the white of the lighthouse. (I'm presuming it's a lighthouse ... ) You've nailed the exposure on the white tower, but have captured the stars. g.
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Re: Wollongong HarbourI never realised Wollongong Harbour could be interesting, you've proved me wrong. I especially like the first image with the stars in the background. Nice idea.
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Re: Wollongong HarbourWow the first one, with the stars and the perspective. Reminded me of Defying Gravity a new Space drama on US Tv. I litterally had a brief moment where I though wow you went to... hang on that doesn't make sense.
Re: Wollongong HarbourMy preference is the fourth one as an astronomer I can identify the scorpius constellation in this shot. They are all nice and show what can be done with with some thought.
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Re: Wollongong HarbourI am a fan of the last one, i bet this looks great at full res.
The third one is very nice also, but a bit of cropping to remove some, not all, of the yellow foreground would suit my tastes.. gerry's photography journey
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Re: Wollongong HarbourAll,
Thanks for the encouraging feedback. It was about time I posted some images. Gary, I really like the 1st one as well. It's the same lighthouse as 3 and 4. There are 2 lighthouses at Wollongong Harbour. This is the old one and is not usually on, I was lucky on the night we were there. Craig, I agree. Someone pointed out that if it wasn't part of the series that it could have been taken on a space station. Big V, Thanks. The 1st one looks a lot better at a higher resolution. Scorpios is very apparent in this shot. Biggerry, I agree with the 3rd one. I tried a few different crops but ended up sticking with the original.
Re: Wollongong HarbourGlad to see you finally posting some of your shots - I like the different perspective and you have nailed the exposure
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Re: Wollongong HarbourGreat series there. If I had to pick a favourite it would have to be the first...very surreal. Can I ask how you managed it?
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Re: Wollongong HarbourGreat stuff indeed!
The first could be improved by removing the mildly distracting dark area at the mid bottom of the image. Love those starry skies!
Re: Wollongong HarbourGreat shots
i like the third but agree with biggerry comments. cheers Tony
Re: Wollongong HarbourCameron,
There was nothing too special about the 1st shot. D300, 14-24 at 14mm, 30s, F2.8. The camera was placed really close to the lighthouse, so close that I couldn't see into the viewfinder and liveview was too dark to see. I ended up chimping test shots to see if the camera was pointed correctly. Focus was set to infinity so the stars would be crisp.
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Yep, Antares really stands out. I would love to see the last image with the number of stars from the first one. I think the smaller size of the lighthouse contrasts beautifully with the larger expanse of deep black sky - it looks like a spaceship awaiting liftoff to the heavens. Frank My photo gallery: http://www.frankalvaro.net
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