Flower Shots

Got a thin skin? Then look elsewhere. Post a link to an image that you've made, and invite others to offer their critiques. Honesty is encouraged, but please be positive in your constructive criticism. Flaming and just plain nastiness will not be tolerated. Please note that this is not an area for you to showcase your images, nor is this a place for you to show-off where you have been. This is an area for you to post images so that you may share with us a technique that you have mastered, or are trying to master. Typically, no more than about four images should be posted in any one post or thread, and the maximum size of any side of any image should not exceed 950 px.

Moderators: Greg B, Nnnnsic, Geoff, Glen, gstark, Moderators

Forum rules
Please note that image critiquing is a matter of give and take: if you post images for critique, and you then expect to receive criticism, then it is also reasonable, fair and appropriate that, in return, you post your critique of the images of other members here as a matter of courtesy. So please do offer your critique of the images of others; your opinion is important, and will help everyone here enjoy their visit to far greater extent.

Also please note that, unless you state something to the contrary, other members might attempt to repost your image with their own post processing applied. We see this as an acceptable form of critique, but should you prefer that others not modify your work, this is perfectly ok, and you should state this, either within your post, or within your signature.

Images posted here should conform with the general forum guidelines. Image sizes should not exceed 950 pixels along the largest side (height or width) and typically no more than four images per post or thread.

Please also ensure that you have a meaningful location included in your profile. Please refer to the FAQ for details of what "meaningful" is.

Flower Shots

Postby viper1968 on Tue Sep 08, 2009 11:59 pm

Hi Everyone,
I just bought a 105mm Nikon macro lens and thought I would give it a try with a couple of photo's of some flowers. I'd be interested to see what people thought. C&C greatly appreciated.

Thanks Andrew

Image

Image

Image

Image
D700 / 14-24mm f2.8/ 24-70mm f2.8/ 85mm f1.4/ 70-200mm f2.8 / 105mm macro f 2.8 / SB900
viper1968
Member
 
Posts: 68
Joined: Tue Feb 27, 2007 6:41 pm
Location: Glenmore Park NSW

Re: Flower Shots

Postby sirhc55 on Wed Sep 09, 2009 12:28 am

It will be a pleasure Andrew :D

#1 - The colour is gorgeous but the very small DOF in the relatively large area detracts from the overall image

#2 - A lovely shot with good DOF, I like

#3 - Just stunning. The small amount of yellow lifts the main colour beautifully

#4 - Again, great colour but the lack of a defined point of interest makes this photo the weakest
Chris
--------------------------------
I started my life with nothing and I’ve still got most of it left
User avatar
sirhc55
Key Member
 
Posts: 12930
Joined: Fri Sep 17, 2004 6:57 pm
Location: Port Macquarie - Olympus EM-10

Re: Flower Shots

Postby aim54x on Wed Sep 09, 2009 2:05 am

Congrats on your new purchase! I have to agree with Rooz, the first one does not do much. However #2 and #3 are simply spectacular! #4 is a nice abstract peice as well.

Great colours and detail in these shots!
Cameron
Nikon F/Nikon 1 | Hasselblad V/XPAN| Leica M/LTM |Sony α/FE/E/Maxxum/M42
Wishlist Nikkor 24/85 f/1.4| Fuji Natura Black
Scout-Images | Flickr | 365Project
User avatar
aim54x
Senior Member
 
Posts: 7305
Joined: Fri Feb 01, 2008 10:13 pm
Location: Penshurst, Sydney

Re: Flower Shots

Postby Gadgit on Wed Sep 09, 2009 7:12 am

The 2nd one is my pick. Simple, nice light and shadows. The water also helps.
Regards,
Steve
Nikon Stuff
Redbubble: http://www.redbubble.com/people/SBalson
Gadgit
Member
 
Posts: 61
Joined: Wed Nov 07, 2007 10:06 pm
Location: Wollongong, NSW

Re: Flower Shots

Postby chasem on Wed Sep 09, 2009 9:24 am

1st picture is my pic love the color! the flower is bursting into life.
chasem
Member
 
Posts: 75
Joined: Fri Sep 05, 2008 9:40 am
Location: Brisbane CBD

Re: Flower Shots

Postby Wink on Wed Sep 09, 2009 10:41 am

I quite like the first one.
The shallow DOF makes you notice all the fine detail of the flower.
Adam.
MY PHOTOS
Allows Image Editing
User avatar
Wink
Senior Member
 
Posts: 911
Joined: Sat Aug 15, 2009 4:23 pm
Location: Seymour, VIC

Re: Flower Shots

Postby surenj on Wed Sep 09, 2009 2:05 pm

Love those colours and composition!

If this is your first batch of photos, I can't wait to see some future installments!!

Did you place the yellow behind the purple in the third or was it already there??
User avatar
surenj
Senior Member
 
Posts: 7197
Joined: Fri Sep 15, 2006 8:21 pm
Location: Artarmon NSW

Re: Flower Shots

Postby viper1968 on Wed Sep 09, 2009 10:39 pm

Thanks everyone for the feedback it has been very helpful.

surenj wrote:Love those colours and composition!

If this is your first batch of photos, I can't wait to see some future installments!!

Did you place the yellow behind the purple in the third or was it already there??


Surenj - i have posted some photo's before. These were the first I'd done with my new macro lens.

No, the yellow was there in the third.
D700 / 14-24mm f2.8/ 24-70mm f2.8/ 85mm f1.4/ 70-200mm f2.8 / 105mm macro f 2.8 / SB900
viper1968
Member
 
Posts: 68
Joined: Tue Feb 27, 2007 6:41 pm
Location: Glenmore Park NSW

Re: Flower Shots

Postby ewm3 on Thu Sep 10, 2009 6:46 pm

I like them all; the '105' is a fine lens!
Eric in Adelaide

Nikon gear but looking for talent...
User avatar
ewm3
Member
 
Posts: 106
Joined: Mon Mar 20, 2006 3:01 pm
Location: South East Adelaide, South Australia

Re: Flower Shots

Postby LaurieE on Thu Sep 10, 2009 9:20 pm

nice series!

i particulalrly like the 2nd and third photos.

were these handheld or on a tripod?

was it natural light?
Laurie

Nikon D90, lenses and stuff
User avatar
LaurieE
Member
 
Posts: 59
Joined: Sat Aug 22, 2009 6:54 pm
Location: Lysterfield, Vic

Re: Flower Shots

Postby viper1968 on Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:10 am

Thanks Laurie
lampukameister wrote:nice series!

i particulalrly like the 2nd and third photos.

were these handheld or on a tripod?

was it natural light?


These were taken using a tripod. I used a Nikon SB900 as an off camera SB900 flash (use pop up flash as the master). This gave me a choice on which direction I wanted the light to hit the subject.
D700 / 14-24mm f2.8/ 24-70mm f2.8/ 85mm f1.4/ 70-200mm f2.8 / 105mm macro f 2.8 / SB900
viper1968
Member
 
Posts: 68
Joined: Tue Feb 27, 2007 6:41 pm
Location: Glenmore Park NSW

Re: Flower Shots

Postby LaurieE on Fri Sep 11, 2009 12:18 am

viper1968 wrote:Thanks Laurie
lampukameister wrote:nice series!

i particulalrly like the 2nd and third photos.

were these handheld or on a tripod?

was it natural light?


These were taken using a tripod. I used a Nikon SB900 as an off camera SB900 flash (use pop up flash as the master). This gave me a choice on which direction I wanted the light to hit the subject.


I see. you certainly used the CLS to your advantage.

by the way - I think you need to change your signature to include your new addition ;-)
Laurie

Nikon D90, lenses and stuff
User avatar
LaurieE
Member
 
Posts: 59
Joined: Sat Aug 22, 2009 6:54 pm
Location: Lysterfield, Vic

Re: Flower Shots

Postby colin_12 on Fri Sep 11, 2009 8:13 am

I really like the first three.
I agree that a little more depth into the foreground of #1 would improve the image.
Very nice choice of subject matter.
Regards Colin
Cameras, lenses and a lust for life
User avatar
colin_12
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1853
Joined: Thu Jan 04, 2007 7:10 pm
Location: Hazelbrook


Return to Image Reviews and Critiques