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Blue Mountains Sunrise ShootHere's a couple of mine from this morning. Conditions were not great and this was the best I could pull out of the images.
Re: Blue Mountains Sunrise ShootAndrew I think the first one may benefit from a BW conversion. I think you might be able to pull some detail from the clouds as well.
Re: Blue Mountains Sunrise ShootAndrew, I'd like to see the second one with the bottom third cropped off, I think the pano crop would suit it.
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Re: Blue Mountains Sunrise ShootI'll give you 10 out of 10 just for getting up that early.
Both images look a little flat and 2 dimensional. I think with a bit of tweaking you can get them looking good. Steve.
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Re: Blue Mountains Sunrise ShootGreat to see you again Andrew...you guys were quick to get pics up!
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Re: Blue Mountains Sunrise ShootHi Andrew looks like you may have done the best with the light on offer I would try again with #2 as it is close to something special,potential with the sun highlights in he backround and mist in the valley,and yes maybee a pano will help--jim
Re: Blue Mountains Sunrise ShootThanks for the comments.
This was the first image "straight out of the camera" - shot raw with default processing - so I had already done quite a lot of processing. I bumped up the contrast - a lot - is this better? This is the second image "straight out of the camera": Here's a modified version - is this better?
Re: Blue Mountains Sunrise ShootAndrew, yes they look better. When you bumped the contrast, you have managed to get rid of some haze. Did you warmify as well?
Re: Blue Mountains Sunrise ShootAndrew, the pano style rework does the scene more justice, looking at the position of the sun there its a real shame it did not come good and light up the bluffs in the right. Kudos for getting up and making the effort!
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No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
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