Blue Mountains Sunrise Shoot

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Blue Mountains Sunrise Shoot

Postby ATJ on Sun Oct 18, 2009 2:44 pm

Here's a couple of mine from this morning. Conditions were not great and this was the best I could pull out of the images.

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Re: Blue Mountains Sunrise Shoot

Postby surenj on Sun Oct 18, 2009 3:41 pm

Andrew I think the first one may benefit from a BW conversion. I think you might be able to pull some detail from the clouds as well.
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Re: Blue Mountains Sunrise Shoot

Postby phillipb on Sun Oct 18, 2009 6:41 pm

Andrew, I'd like to see the second one with the bottom third cropped off, I think the pano crop would suit it.
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Re: Blue Mountains Sunrise Shoot

Postby Killakoala on Sun Oct 18, 2009 6:44 pm

I'll give you 10 out of 10 just for getting up that early. :)

Both images look a little flat and 2 dimensional. I think with a bit of tweaking you can get them looking good.
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Re: Blue Mountains Sunrise Shoot

Postby aim54x on Sun Oct 18, 2009 8:47 pm

Great to see you again Andrew...you guys were quick to get pics up!
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Re: Blue Mountains Sunrise Shoot

Postby inmotion on Sun Oct 18, 2009 10:34 pm

Hi Andrew looks like you may have done the best with the light on offer I would try again with #2 as it is close to something special,potential with the sun highlights in he backround and mist in the valley,and yes maybee a pano will help--jim
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Re: Blue Mountains Sunrise Shoot

Postby ATJ on Mon Oct 19, 2009 12:23 pm

Thanks for the comments.

This was the first image "straight out of the camera" - shot raw with default processing - so I had already done quite a lot of processing.
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I bumped up the contrast - a lot - is this better?

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This is the second image "straight out of the camera":

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Here's a modified version - is this better?

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Re: Blue Mountains Sunrise Shoot

Postby surenj on Mon Oct 19, 2009 9:25 pm

Andrew, yes they look better. When you bumped the contrast, you have managed to get rid of some haze. Did you warmify as well?
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Re: Blue Mountains Sunrise Shoot

Postby biggerry on Mon Oct 19, 2009 10:44 pm

Andrew, the pano style rework does the scene more justice, looking at the position of the sun there its a real shame it did not come good and light up the bluffs in the right. Kudos for getting up and making the effort!
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