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Pano Story Bridge Brisbane

Postby TonyT on Sun Nov 01, 2009 11:18 am

Story Bridge Brisbane
6 shot pano handheld merged in CS
I think its to busy I think I lost the bridge

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Re: Pano Story Bridge Brisbane

Postby Big V on Sun Nov 01, 2009 12:12 pm

What if you cropped the bridge more or used a slightly longer focal length next time?
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Re: Pano Story Bridge Brisbane

Postby zafra52 on Sun Nov 01, 2009 2:53 pm

I quite like it as is. It's a city landscape and by definition it has to be busy. The tree branches on the top left and the vegetation on the bottom right frame the bridge nicely. Anyway, that's what I think.
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Re: Pano Story Bridge Brisbane

Postby hellman on Sun Nov 01, 2009 4:31 pm

I think it's quite a nice pano - clouds add some interest for me. Only thing I see getting in the way are the black leaves / branches top left. Maybe Big V's suggestion with a longer focal length will get some results you prefer?
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Re: Pano Story Bridge Brisbane

Postby gstark on Sun Nov 01, 2009 6:10 pm

Hi Tony,

This is very nice, with a nice perspective on the bridge.

Try cropping a little off the bottom. Remove about half of what's there now. Look at the white structure towards the right, along the water's edge. Crop around the where that structure ends, towards the lower section of this image.
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Re: Pano Story Bridge Brisbane

Postby TonyT on Mon Nov 02, 2009 7:40 am

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Thanks for the comments
Here's the crop as suggested and have lighten the leaves as well and now I am happy with it beening busy Thanks Zafra52
Makes it more of a pano and I will keep in mind to use a longer focal length.
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Re: Pano Story Bridge Brisbane

Postby hellman on Mon Nov 02, 2009 8:46 am

Good work, it's has come up really well. :)
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Re: Pano Story Bridge Brisbane

Postby aim54x on Mon Nov 02, 2009 1:01 pm

I prefer the rework....but is there anything that can pulled back in those clouds??? They appear a bit too bright to me and steal attention from the bridge
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