Bondi Sculpture minimeet

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Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby surenj on Tue Nov 03, 2009 12:03 am

Thanks Cameron for organising this! As usual it was great to catch up with everyone and the 7D. :mrgreen:

Here is my take from the meet. The light was fading, tough and flat. I have gone for a artsy feel to rise to the occasion. Of course, light painting was something I couldn't resist. C & C much appreciated.

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Suicide fishing
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It would also be nice to visit during sunrise just to see how it all looks in more directional light.

[BTW LR doesn't recognise 7D raw files; perhaps I need to upgrade]
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby gstark on Tue Nov 03, 2009 1:26 am

Suren,

The second and third of these images are wonderful. Your treatments of both the subjects and the images are very well executed.
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby biggerry on Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:44 am

cracking stuff suren, I really like the fisherman and the last light painted one,

The light was fading, tough and flat

:agree:

I think you got some very good results considering the conditions :up: :up:
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby marcotrov on Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:59 am

I really like your collection here Suren. The first 3 are really terrific. Love the atnosphere you have generated.
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby xerubus on Tue Nov 03, 2009 10:09 am

Great series mate... nicely done. Really like the fisherman... :up:
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby Glen on Tue Nov 03, 2009 11:59 am

Suren great stuff, especially the last 3. The rock fisherman really grabs my attention
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby surenj on Tue Nov 03, 2009 5:08 pm

Thanks everyone for your comments. It would be great if we can get a fisherman to stay relatively still so we can capture him sharper. one strobe to get him to stand out would have been nice too. :wink:

If anyone is game to check it out on a early morning, let me know. I am contemplating Saturday...... Sunday is the South Head meet. :mrgreen:

biggerry wrote:and the last light painted one

I think a study of these sculptures to purely lightpaint would yield very interesting results as well. They are the perfect subject to lightpaint... what do you think Gerry? Are you keen? :up:

I am really itching to do some strobist lights on these. There were some good ones on the Tamarama beach as well....

FYI: There are security guards around at night. I felt relatively secure when I was walking back to the car which was 25 mins away.
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby wendellt on Tue Nov 03, 2009 5:41 pm

Nice composition on the first image
and i like what you are doing in the 3rd it looks very surreal
it's nice to see you experimenting with lower shutterspeeds with the 2nd image
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby colin_12 on Tue Nov 03, 2009 7:52 pm

I really like the light in the first Suren.
I think the last would look more impressive without the light leading to the subject if that if feasable. :up:
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby biggerry on Tue Nov 03, 2009 8:24 pm

what do you think Gerry? Are you keen?


keen :up:

FYI: There are security guards around at night. I felt relatively secure when I was walking back to the car which was 25 mins away.


:up: i was worried when i got that message saying you were still 10 mins away from your car! I reckon you just about could have parked at home in kenso and walked all the way :mrgreen: :mrgreen:
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby aim54x on Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:13 pm

Great work...now I feel almost ashamed to have a look at my stuff....I really like the fisherman pic!
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby dviv on Wed Nov 04, 2009 9:39 am

aim54x wrote:I really like the fisherman pic!


Me too :up:

It looks a lot better on-screen than it did on the LCD :mrgreen:
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby DJT on Wed Nov 04, 2009 3:39 pm

Good stuff surenj, love the fisherman & desolation too.

Got a few days off work next week, will have to check it out
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby Matt. K on Wed Nov 04, 2009 11:23 pm

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You were on fire for that shoot! They are excellent images!Great to see some creativity working so well.
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby surenj on Thu Nov 05, 2009 8:28 pm

Matt. K wrote:You were on fire for that shoot!

Thanks Matt!

dviv wrote:lot better on-screen than it did on the LCD

How did you see it on my LCD?? I did increase the contrast to make the waves look whiter.. :mrgreen:

DJT wrote:few days off work next week, will have to check it out

I would suggest either dusk or dawn. You will have some more control over the light that way.

biggerry wrote:i was worried when i got that message saying you were still 10 mins away from your car! I reckon you just about could have parked at home in kenso and walked all the way

:rotfl2: I didn't factor-in the uphill climb on the way back. By the time I got to the car, I was so exausted, I was tempted to sleep in the car!!

colin_12 wrote:the last would look more impressive without the light leading to the subject if that if feasable

Colin, anything is feasible. :mrgreen: Thanks for your suggestion.

Here is the one without the light leading the way. I wish I could try the lightpainting again.....I might not have any time. :|
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby colin_12 on Thu Nov 05, 2009 10:36 pm

I like this latest version Surenj. :cheers:
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby Big V on Fri Nov 06, 2009 5:17 pm

This is a fantastic series.
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby surenj on Fri Nov 06, 2009 11:35 pm

Thankx colin and BigV.
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby dviv on Sat Nov 07, 2009 7:22 am

surenj wrote:
dviv wrote:lot better on-screen than it did on the LCD

How did you see it on my LCD?? I did increase the contrast to make the waves look whiter.. :mrgreen:


You showed me! We were talking about the difference in the Canon LCD's - Turns out you were right :cheers:
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby surenj on Sat Nov 07, 2009 1:16 pm

dviv wrote:You showed me! We were talking about the difference in the Canon LCD's - Turns out you were right

I forgot about that! I thought the 7D might be able to snoop wirelessly into other Canon's in the area. :wink:
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby dviv on Sat Nov 07, 2009 2:42 pm

surenj wrote:
dviv wrote:You showed me! We were talking about the difference in the Canon LCD's - Turns out you were right

I forgot about that! I thought the 7D might be able to snoop wirelessly into other Canon's in the area. :wink:


Now there's an idea!! :mrgreen: :bowdown:
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby Geoff M on Sun Nov 08, 2009 12:15 pm

Greta series, # 2 & 3 for me work best, also like #1 but would prefer to see it without the tog in frame although the inclusion does give a sense of scale to the sculpture.
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Re: Bondi Sculpture minimeet

Postby surenj on Sun Nov 08, 2009 8:42 pm

dviv wrote:Now there's an idea!!

apart from a 5 and 7 shot bracketing and a 12 megapixel sensor with ISO 25000, this wireless snoop function is the only thing missing from this camera. :mrgreen:

Geoff M wrote:would prefer to see it without the tog in frame

Thanks for your suggestion Geoff. I am kicking myself because I didn't take a frame without the tog!!
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