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Portrait

Postby blacknstormy on Mon Nov 09, 2009 10:20 pm

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Of a bush rat, Rattus fuscipes :) Gorgeous little buggers, but smelly as hell !!! Been trapping at Mt Tamborine (Hi Geoff :) ). I've been trying to get a photo of one of these guys for years - literally - but they are really jumpy, and HATE the sound of the shutter going off, and as for the flash !! For the first time ever, we had a bush rat that actually sat on the log when we let it go, and just watched me - let me take shots, let me CHIMP shots !!!! It almost seemed to pose, and then was gone :)

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Re: Portrait

Postby Geoff M on Tue Nov 10, 2009 7:07 am

Hi Rel nice captures. Everything works so well, composition, exposure, sharpness. The only problem I have is the subject matter, it's vermin!

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Re: Portrait

Postby Matt. K on Wed Nov 11, 2009 9:21 pm

Brilliant! How do you get these shots?
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Re: Portrait

Postby zafra52 on Wed Nov 11, 2009 10:27 pm

Very nice photos, sharp and colourful. I guess patience also was a major asset.
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Re: Portrait

Postby surenj on Thu Nov 12, 2009 12:41 am

This is definitely a model in the mouse world. :mrgreen:

Look how he/she is zoolander(ing) you in the first. Send it for the cover of mouse vogue.... :D

Brilliant! PS: One could cool down the first a tad.
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Re: Portrait

Postby aim54x on Thu Nov 12, 2009 9:43 am

surenj wrote:Look how he/she is zoolander(ing) you in the first. Send it for the cover of mouse vogue.... :D
 ROFL...but you are correct.

Great shots Rel. These would be very much at home in many a book or website
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Re: Portrait

Postby ATJ on Thu Nov 12, 2009 9:46 am

Excellent shots, as always, Rel.

I wonder whether the white balance is correct. The first one looks a bit warm on my monitor.
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Re: Portrait

Postby biggerry on Thu Nov 12, 2009 1:41 pm

Look how he/she is zoolander(ing) you in the first. Send it for the cover of mouse vogue....


:rotfl2: after having the displeasure of watching that movie, i have to agree.

These are great shots, that first one is something you expect out of a wildlife magazine etc...that paw placement is spot on :wink:

AND..its all the more amazing that it is in the wild! :cheers:
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Re: Portrait

Postby blacknstormy on Sat Nov 14, 2009 2:40 pm

Hey everyone :)
Sorry I haven't responded - been working nightshift and finishing at 2am, which I really don't handle well :(
Thanks for the feedback - you are probably right about the warmth/wb in the first, but I can't tell on this monitor. Still on the borrowed laptop, which has a strange blue hue to the screen I just can't figure out ... as soon as my poor old lappy gets fixed I'll be able to fix it all up :)
Was soooooo lucky that this little one actually sat - like I said, this has never happened for me before with a bush rat, melomys yes, but fuscipes no way in hell :) This little one must have been in either a really good mood, or was too scared to move. Judging by the behaviour of all of it's bretheren that we've dealt with over the years, I'm guessing good mood :)
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