Matterhorn, my favourite mountain (pano version added!!)

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Matterhorn, my favourite mountain (pano version added!!)

Postby Chica on Sat Nov 14, 2009 4:39 pm

Hi everyone

Here's a HDR image of my favourite mountain in the world :-)

Its a 9 shot HDR so lots of scope for playing... so any suggestions appreciated.

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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain.

Postby colin_12 on Sat Nov 14, 2009 4:54 pm

Cool pic Cathy.
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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain.

Postby biggerry on Sat Nov 14, 2009 5:10 pm

zomg, postcard quality, would not even pick it to be a HDR image, what kind of exposure gaps did you use?

I don't think i have anything that would make it substantially better, the image has a very nice leading line of teh ridges in the foreground up to the main peak, my only thought would be a pano style, however I think if you chop that foreground away it will not work....so.. :up: :up:
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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain.

Postby idleowen on Sat Nov 14, 2009 6:05 pm

great shot,one of my favourite mountains too.....switzerland is just such a fantastic place,Grindelwald,Wengen and lakes as well.......beautiful.......
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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain

Postby firsty on Sat Nov 14, 2009 7:31 pm

not knowing the area, is this taken from a plane or another mountain
the reason I ask is how did you get nine shots to line up if shot from a moving plane

great image by the way :)
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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain

Postby Chica on Sat Nov 14, 2009 7:38 pm

Hi Firsty :-)
I took the photo from the Klein Matterhorn, which overlooks the Matterhorn. Beautiful place, reachable via 3 cable cars... the last 2 cable cars fit 80 people in them at one time! I also took photos of this beautiful mountain from a range of other locations, so stay tuned :-)
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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain

Postby surenj on Sat Nov 14, 2009 10:32 pm

I agree with the others. Very nicely processed and composed.

I am left with wanting to see scale. Perhaps you could have got a friend to trek along the ridge wearing the classic red jacket. Place them at the bottom right rule of thirds. :mrgreen:
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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain

Postby DebT on Sun Nov 15, 2009 8:22 am

Nicely done ,
remember to bring some shots along Sat (USB/DVD) - far more interesting than the usual TV programs
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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain

Postby Killakoala on Sun Nov 15, 2009 8:43 am

Spectacular. :)
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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain.

Postby gstark on Sun Nov 15, 2009 8:46 am

biggerry wrote: my only thought would be a pano style, however I think if you chop that foreground away it will not work....so.. :up: :up:


I suspect that it actually will. If you look at those ridges at the bottom, there are two of them. One heads of towards the right and then ends, and towards the left, a second one commences, leading more into the main mountain.

By cropping out the first of those - set the crop point immediately above where that first ridge ends, you now just have the second ridge leading back into the mountain from the left, and a slightly pano crop.

Try it and see what you think.
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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain (pano version added!!)

Postby Chica on Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:27 pm

Here is the pano version, what do you think? I cropped a little bit off the sky as well, as it didnt look balanced until I did that.

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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain (pano version added!!)

Postby biggerry on Sun Nov 15, 2009 12:59 pm

By cropping out the first of those - set the crop point immediately above where that first ridge ends, you now just have the second ridge leading back into the mountain from the left, and a slightly pano crop.


:bowdown:

Thats an awesome crop Chica, cropped beyond my wildest dreams :up: Very nice spotting Gary, who says your just a pretty face :wink:
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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain (pano version added!!)

Postby wendellt on Sun Nov 15, 2009 1:50 pm

wow king of the mountain
you are one brave fellow
wish i could trek for days
the most ive treked is a day in new zealand armed with strawberries and a waterbottle thats as much as i can handle
tell us more about how you treked the void to get this awesome image
did you have breathing gear?
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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain (pano version added!!)

Postby Chica on Sun Nov 15, 2009 2:20 pm

Hey Wendle.... it wasn't as much a trek as a ride up 3 cable cars to a very cool lookout :-) No breathing gear required, though the air was a little thinner up there!
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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain (pano version added!!)

Postby robert on Sun Nov 15, 2009 3:05 pm

Great shot- nice clarity.

It was totally covered in cloud and snowing when we were ther- middle of summer as well.

A bit unconventional and might not work but what about a vertical pano?
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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain (pano version added!!)

Postby gstark on Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:15 pm

biggerry wrote:Thats an awesome crop Chica, cropped beyond my wildest dreams


I agree, but the real question is about how Cathy feels about this version?

Very nice spotting Gary, who says your just a pretty face :wink:


Thanks, Gerry, and to answer your question, nobody in living memory! :cheers:
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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain (pano version added!!)

Postby Chica on Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:23 pm

Thanks for the nice comments everyone :-)

I like both versions....and I am grateful to Gary for suggesting the pano as I wouldn't have thought to try it otherwise. That's just one thing that makes this site so wonderful!! I am looking forward to getting some of these holiday photos on the wall!

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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain (pano version added!!)

Postby gstark on Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:38 pm

Cathy,

Chica wrote:I like both versions....and I am grateful to Gary for suggesting the pano


That was Gerry's idea. I merely offered a suggestion as to how it might be implemented, and I'm glad that it works for you.

HDR is my new favourite way to play with photos!


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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain (pano version added!!)

Postby Man Tripod on Sun Nov 15, 2009 5:54 pm

Cathy. Great shot but i don't see the need for HDR with this one. The clouds look a little strange to me.

Try playing with one image in lightroom and i think you will get similar results without the fake HDR look.
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Re: Matterhorn, my favourite mountain (pano version added!!)

Postby aim54x on Sun Nov 15, 2009 9:06 pm

great picture, cant spot the HDR, and the pano crop works really well.

I would love to get out there and see the world, but this does not look like it will be happening any time soon
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