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Strawberry fields foreverI had strawberries in the fridge and the song randomly stuck in my head, so before making a smoothie, I took a few photos before a thirst-quenching end
All photos taken using the 105mm f2 DC. Hassy, Leica, Nikon, iPhone
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Re: Strawberry fields foreverNice concept but I feel it needs more DOF especially in the first shot which has nice composition.
Re: Strawberry fields foreverAnd more DoF too in the second.
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Re: Strawberry fields foreverAlso, I find the highlights a bit too blown
Greg
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Re: Strawberry fields foreverI tend to agree about the highlights, however I like the DOF in #2 and #3. In #1 I think it could be a little deeper, but no too much. Just enough to get that front strawberry crisp from front to back then dropping of over the rest of them.
Hope the smoothie was good
Re: Strawberry fields foreverLike the colour and layout in #1 & #2. More DOF needed though to make it pop.
I find the blown highlights though distracting. Great concept D700 / 14-24mm f2.8/ 24-70mm f2.8/ 85mm f1.4/ 70-200mm f2.8 / 105mm macro f 2.8 / SB900
Re: Strawberry fields foreverThanks for the feedback.
Hmmm I checked the histogram and it didn't come up with any blown highlights. Looks like more strawberry shopping for me Hassy, Leica, Nikon, iPhone
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Re: Strawberry fields foreverI also would like to see more DOF. I don't think the highlight's are 'blown' per se, but find them a bit strong/distracting.
Geoff
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Re: Strawberry fields foreverThe inclusion of the knife and chopped berry was a good compositional idea in #2
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