Some odd shots for critique

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Some odd shots for critique

Postby Matt. K on Sun Nov 29, 2009 10:15 pm

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Yes...they are bottles

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They look like some kind of beautiful calligraphy

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Was having breakfast with Stubbsy when I spotted this one

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How could I not take this one?
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Re: Some odd shots for critique

Postby aim54x on Sun Nov 29, 2009 10:22 pm

A very interesting, well spotted set. I really like the abstract nature of the first,
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Re: Some odd shots for critique

Postby Willy wombat on Mon Nov 30, 2009 4:51 pm

#4 was the one I enjoyed the most simply for the clash between the random, patterned and structured colour elements.

I dont like the title of #2 as it makes it too easy to dismiss this image (it deserves more as its actually a very interesting abstract).
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Re: Some odd shots for critique

Postby biggerry on Mon Nov 30, 2009 9:08 pm

I quite like number 4, however the median strip fence really takes away from teh image - I can see how some would really like this fence there, however for me, it ain't rocking the boat :)

I also like number one, nicely spotted, maybe a bit of extra PP to jazz it up? contrast + curves?
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Re: Some odd shots for critique

Postby ian.bertram on Mon Nov 30, 2009 9:39 pm

I agree with Biggerry. I'd love t see the shot minus the fence as I think it would really add to the quirkiness you have found in all the other shots.
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