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Horsing About

Postby Wink on Fri Dec 18, 2009 11:08 pm

Thought i'd take my 10-22mm out at sunset and see if i could get any reasonable shots of my girlfriends horse...
Didn't take him long to get annoyed with the flash. :lol:

I like this shot. I'm a little disappointed i didn't pay more attention to the focus points as it looks like the focus is forward of the eye a little.
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I picked up a 580EX II, wireless transmitter/receiver (thanks for the advice surenj :D ) and a shoot through umbrella kit this week so i thought i'd give that a try as well...
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Re: Horsing About

Postby surenj on Sat Dec 19, 2009 4:38 pm

Adam, I love the first one for it's great perspective and composition. With a subject like this, I think it's ok that your focus maybe off. [unless you can reshoot? :mrgreen: ]

Dude, did you really take an umbrella and a light stand to photograph a horse?? :shock: :shock: :shock: That's worse than me in terms of lugging lights around the place!!

Hope your umbrella didn't fly off too much. :mrgreen:

The last shot needs a little rim light to outline the horse. Also the angle isn't too flattering.

Too bad you are not in Sydney. Otherwise we could have had some fun with the lights!
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Re: Horsing About

Postby Wink on Sat Dec 19, 2009 5:21 pm

This fella is 17 hands something high so for me it's a case of trying to work with what he's doing. Without someone to help me i was just chasing him around the paddock. :lol:
Luckily it's in the country so not to many people would've seen this strange man chasing a horse with a white umbrella on a pole. :lol:
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Re: Horsing About

Postby biggerry on Sat Dec 19, 2009 5:27 pm

Also the angle isn't too flattering.

"you saying i'm fat?"


I like teh concept of the first image, but i think you need the nose in the shot as well, nonethelless its a shame that eye is not in focus - that shot must have just about had his nose on the lens of that 10-22 :cough:
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Re: Horsing About

Postby surenj on Sat Dec 19, 2009 6:18 pm

biggerry wrote: Also the angle isn't too flattering.


"you saying i'm fat?"


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Re: Horsing About

Postby Wink on Sat Dec 19, 2009 6:28 pm

It was pretty close alright.
I had difficulty getting on his nose because he'd then push at me to investigate what i was doing.

The camera sounds had him intrigued. Every time i took a shot his ears would fly up. :lol:
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