Royal Botanic Gardens, Sydney

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Royal Botanic Gardens, Sydney

Postby Elver on Tue Dec 29, 2009 12:55 pm

I took these photos in the Royal Botanic Gardens in Sydney on Boxing Day.

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Re: Royal Botanic Gardens, Sydney

Postby zafra52 on Tue Dec 29, 2009 1:43 pm

Exquisite! I like the colour composition and sharpness
in the first and third pictures. Well done!
After thought, you could improve the second picture
by removing (cropping) the half flower in the second
picture.
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Re: Royal Botanic Gardens, Sydney

Postby colin_12 on Tue Dec 29, 2009 7:26 pm

The RBG is a great place.
I like the third of these. Nice simple lines.
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Re: Royal Botanic Gardens, Sydney

Postby craig.rohse on Tue Dec 29, 2009 8:35 pm

I like the first and third Image.

The colours in the third one are fantastic and the first one is a great idea. :up: :up:
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Re: Royal Botanic Gardens, Sydney

Postby aim54x on Tue Dec 29, 2009 9:37 pm

I was considering going out there a few days ago, looks like i missed out.

I like #1, but does #2 look a bit overblown on the flower petals?
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Re: Royal Botanic Gardens, Sydney

Postby sheepie on Wed Dec 30, 2009 9:14 pm

If these are as sharp as they appear in the small size posted, you've captured some great images here. If I was to be picky, I would perhaps point out the distracting tear in the leaf on the first one - pity about that (otherwise fantastic shot).
The third is the standout here for me - very simple, impressively sharp, with just the right DOF.
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Re: Royal Botanic Gardens, Sydney

Postby DebT on Thu Dec 31, 2009 12:59 pm

Nice shots,
really like the Echinacia (however it's spelt) and the lotus are nice - love the way the water rolls off the leaves and the flowers are great subjects
mm remind me to visit the lotus pond in Adelaide as they only flower for a short time
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Re: Royal Botanic Gardens, Sydney

Postby Elver on Fri Jan 01, 2010 10:46 am

Thanks for all your compliments and critiques.

The beauty of the Boantic Gardens is there is always something in its full glory at any time of the year.

With the overcast skies and light rain on Boxing Day it seemed the perfect day for photos.
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Re: Royal Botanic Gardens, Sydney

Postby gstark on Fri Jan 01, 2010 11:52 am

I do like the first of these. Beautiful rich colours, and elegant simplicity in the subject.

I would like to see greater DoF however, but that's a minor niggle; this is a very nice image.
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Re: Royal Botanic Gardens, Sydney

Postby edneeves on Mon Jan 04, 2010 10:05 pm

That first one is cracking. It leads your eye down into the petal and then you get hit "POW" with that super crisp water droplet.

Simple and effective.

I am with the general concensus on the 2nd, great shot but a few distracting elements.

#3 is simple and effective all over again... your not into minimalism are you, totally white concrete house?
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