The Holiday of the Cloud

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The Holiday of the Cloud

Postby biggerry on Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:27 am

Well I am sure many can appreciate the rainy weather that occured over the lovely holiday break - everywhere I went, from the north coast to the Blue mountains....it rained...and I got eaten by mosquitos..and ticks...and leeches. Nonetheless, the following images pretty much sum-up my holiday break of walks and 4wding in a car thats not meant to 4wd.. especially in the wet :|

The stuff that was the cause of my wet holiday...
I stayed dry during this walk, but was bitten by mosquitos - on the back, through the shirt :evil:

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2 mins after I took this image it was completely white....and then I got wet, again.

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once again - sunrise, failed. (but I am definitely heading back to this location when the weather is better)
yep, you guessed it I got wet again...

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yeah looks pretty the water eh? 2 leeches pulled after this walk, but did not get wet.
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sweated my ass off up the hill in the ONLY 0.5 hours of sunshine for the whole week, then got wet and cold.
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Re: The Holiday of the Cloud

Postby norwest on Sat Jan 09, 2010 11:04 am

At least you could walk and didn't need to anchor yourself to a tree to avoid being carried away. :wink:

Love the 3rd shot Gerry. The location shows enormous promise with decent weather and a morning/evening sky. Well spotted.
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Re: The Holiday of the Cloud

Postby zafra52 on Sat Jan 09, 2010 12:02 pm

Well, what we say? I am glad of
your travels and tribulations for
otherwise you wouldn’t have been
Able to share these beautiful pictures.
I am assuming your camera and
lenses are weather sealed.
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Re: The Holiday of the Cloud

Postby Bindii on Sat Jan 09, 2010 1:29 pm

Wow some truly stunning images here! Each of them shines on their own but put together they make such an impact.. loving them all! :)
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Re: The Holiday of the Cloud

Postby the foto fanatic on Sat Jan 09, 2010 3:37 pm

norwest wrote:Love the 3rd shot Gerry.


:agree:
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Re: The Holiday of the Cloud

Postby ozimax on Sat Jan 09, 2010 4:52 pm

the foto fanatic wrote:
norwest wrote:Love the 3rd shot Gerry.


:agree:


:agree:

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Re: The Holiday of the Cloud

Postby Geoff M on Sat Jan 09, 2010 5:19 pm

ozimax wrote:
the foto fanatic wrote:
norwest wrote:Love the 3rd shot Gerry.


:agree:


:agree:

Fabulous image.


:agree: :lol:

All of these images have a great feel to them. I say the overcast weather has worked in your favour, blue skies are boring!
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Re: The Holiday of the Cloud

Postby biggerry on Sat Jan 09, 2010 6:36 pm

Interesting that people like the third image, it almost got the boot for another seascape one!

The location shows enormous promise with decent weather and a morning/evening sky. Well spotted.


yeah loving that spot, quite easy to get too also, just need to watch the tides....

I am assuming your camera and lenses are weather sealed.


I wish :) I was alittle worried about the D80, but the old sports cap on the camera assembly seemed to keep most of the water off, the nikkor 17-55 and tokina 11-16 seem pretty well sealed and I did not have too much concern about them.

I was using the Flipside 400AW bag which has an all weather hood, this worked great, kept out all the water and still permits one to easily access the gear - admitting when you access the gear you need to be a bit prudent and not do it in a down pour.

but put together they make such an impact


nothing like a bit of story telling thru a few images :up:

blue skies are boring!


ya would not be saying that after the 5th day of rain and heading out for another walk :cough: :cough: I would have been happy with just one day of blue :roll:
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Re: The Holiday of the Cloud

Postby surenj on Sat Jan 09, 2010 11:28 pm

Gerry,

Kudos for braving the weather to get these. It has been worth it looking at your results.

Love the #1 but wanting see a little more of the leaf. Did you hand hold this? Also how did you flash for this one??

#2 is upto your usual pano standards. :up:

#3 I would prefer slightly more fluffy waves. I found that 0.5 seconds was best for waves during our coogee shoot. I suppose it depends on the speed of the waves.

Did you hand hold #4? If so, impressive at 1/2 second! Love the streaky bubbles on the water.
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Re: The Holiday of the Cloud

Postby wendellt on Sun Jan 10, 2010 2:28 am

1st and 3rd are the best ones
the macro image is great, good to see you adventuring out and getting great pics, keep it up
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Re: The Holiday of the Cloud

Postby craig.rohse on Sun Jan 10, 2010 8:08 am

Well done Gerry!!!

The first one is nice, thank god it was raining :) and the third one should be printed and hung up on a wall. :up: :up:
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Re: The Holiday of the Cloud

Postby biggerry on Sun Jan 10, 2010 4:15 pm

more of the leaf. Did you hand hold this? Also how did you flash for this one??


i agree, I actually did try and get more leaf in the frame, I was aiming to get the whole leaf but was under duress. :violin:
Hand held with the micro 55mm with the SB600 handheld off to the left.

#3 I would prefer slightly more fluffy waves


yes, that woudl be nice - I just wish I had a bit more time there, I only took 1 composition of that little area due to the rain (which you cant see, but it was there). The waves were actually quite nice and big and if I had the patience I would have come away with a much better shot.

Did you hand hold #4? If so, impressive at 1/2 second! Love the streaky bubbles on the water


yep, took about 4 images of this frame to try and get a decent one - no coffee for days so the hands were pretty steady.. :rotfl2:

the macro image is great, good to see you adventuring out


ta Wendell, yep sometimes you just gotta get and have a crack...

Well done Gerry!!!


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Re: The Holiday of the Cloud

Postby colin_12 on Sun Jan 10, 2010 10:48 pm

This is a great set Gerry. At least you have green to go with the rain.
A mate and I went down to Bungonia and it was as dry as ........eventhough it rained most of the night prior to two days of walking and had a shower on the second day.
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