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Drought Landscape! Now with Pano Version ;-)I went home to the family farm over the new year break. Believe it or not its a drought. They had 7 inches of rain between 25-31 Dec so its all green. I shot this in the afternoon sun.
Critique welcome. Would be interested in your views on it and whether it can be improved in PP, I like it but it may just be the childhood memories the photo evokes. I shot at F/5.6, should have gone out to F8-11 maybe. Here is a crop based on feedback, looking better? Last edited by whitey on Sun Jan 10, 2010 12:57 pm, edited 2 times in total.
D80, 50mm F/1.8, 18-70mm DX, Sigma 10-20mm
Re: Drought Landscape!This is beautiful as it is.
Perhaps try cropping into pano(ish) by taking away 15% top and bottom.
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First thought I had was brilliant image, but would be better with top and bottom cropped .. could see it hanging on the wall somewhere
Re: Drought Landscape!Fantastic image
Crop a little off top and bottom as mentioned then get it printed LARGE ! well done Nikon boy Norman
Re: Drought Landscape!I agree with the suggestions to crop this a little.
From the top, leave a little bit of sky above the windmill. From the bottom, you have some streaks of sunlight just below the tower. leave those streaks in; crop just below them. g.
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Re: Drought Landscape!Pano crop added, thanks for the feedback
D80, 50mm F/1.8, 18-70mm DX, Sigma 10-20mm
Re: Drought Landscape! Now with Pano Version ;-)The pano version is perfect!
Re: Drought Landscape! Now with Pano Version ;-)Looking very good now!!!
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Re: Drought Landscape! Now with Pano Version ;-)Definitely a fan of the pano version - great capture.
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Re: Drought Landscape! Now with Pano Version ;-)Pano version much better!
alittle extra sharpening for web makes alot of difference here imo. I had a quick play - let me know if ya want it removed. gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
Re: Drought Landscape! Now with Pano Version ;-)Agree with the others that the cropped and sharpened version looks better.
I would also suggest playing with BW (yellow filter.....)
Re: Drought Landscape! Now with Pano Version ;-)The final image is so much better. It's a scene that really lends itself to a crop/pano.
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Very nice, I will have to have a closer look at sharpening. Are you using NX2? I am pretty happy with the results now. Will make some changes to the original and see how it looks as a print. D80, 50mm F/1.8, 18-70mm DX, Sigma 10-20mm
Re: Drought Landscape! Now with Pano Version ;-)Great images, crop works even better and i like the slightly darker finish compared to the brighter image that Gerry has done. i would definitely print this one.
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yep, in this case since it was already web sized I just applied radius 2 at about 50-60 % from memory. If you are going in for print maybe consider large radius (maybe 20) at 10% followed by radius 2 at 60%. All nominal figures though...you gotta play with the particular image to get the best rests imo. There was a good hint from Wendell yonks ago about progressive sharpening that I found very helpful. If you cant find it let me know and I will try and dig it up. gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
Re: Drought Landscape! Now with Pano Version ;-)Just a quick postscript to this thread. Had this printed on canvas 50x100cm at Zimprint today. Very happy. Thanks for the advice given guys.
D80, 50mm F/1.8, 18-70mm DX, Sigma 10-20mm
Re: Drought Landscape! Now with Pano Version ;-)
would look even better hanging for a few weeks in this: http://www.dslrusers.com/viewtopic.php?f=16&t=38518&p=409990#p409990 gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
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gerry, happy to put it in, you will need to bend the rules though exif says taken on 6/01/2010 D80, 50mm F/1.8, 18-70mm DX, Sigma 10-20mm
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