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Adelaide Zoo

Postby blacknstormy on Thu Jan 14, 2010 11:49 pm

Hi all - Merry Christmas & Happy new Year :)
Sorry haven't been on in ages, but we decided to do a roadtrip to Perth, and only just got back :)
On the way, we dropped in to the Adelaide Zoo - these are a few of the shots that I took ... I know that they are captive animal shots, but I tried anyway.
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Re: Adelaide Zoo

Postby tommyg on Fri Jan 15, 2010 12:16 am

That leopard shot is amazing!

What lens combo etc did you use for this one?
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Re: Adelaide Zoo

Postby Big V on Fri Jan 15, 2010 3:00 pm

Good shots, unusual but very effective processing on these.
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Re: Adelaide Zoo

Postby DebT on Fri Jan 15, 2010 7:34 pm

Hi,
a great framed shot of the fox and you have used the leopard cage to an advantage - really like the creativity
The Panda - you'll be glad to know they are outside - shot them Thursday and much more interesting and enjoyable - are you coming on the 24th? - refer post Adelaide meet
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Re: Adelaide Zoo

Postby DanielA on Fri Jan 15, 2010 9:45 pm

That's a awesome shot of the leopard.
No sign of the fence, perfect eyes.

tommyg wrote:What lens combo etc did you use for this one?

EXIF says it 165mm, f/4, 1/400s. So I'm guessing a 70-200 f/2.8.

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Re: Adelaide Zoo

Postby aim54x on Fri Jan 15, 2010 10:27 pm

That leopard is amazing! Great stuff Rel
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Re: Adelaide Zoo

Postby craig.rohse on Fri Jan 15, 2010 10:38 pm

aim54x wrote:That leopard is amazing! Great stuff Rel


:agree:

What an Image!!! :up: :up:
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Re: Adelaide Zoo

Postby blacknstormy on Fri Jan 15, 2010 10:56 pm

Thanks for all of your comments - much appreciated :)

Daniel - spot on with the exif data - trusty old 80-200 2.8, is a very sweet lens !
Deb - would have loved to see the Pandas in the enclosure, but we were on the way to Perth at the time, and got to spend a day at the zoo. Am back in Brissie now, but wish I was still on the road - looking forward to some shots from the day.

I feell terrible though, and owe you all an apology (should have stated in the original post, but was about to go to bed, and didn't think) - the background has been 'removed' from the shot .. this is the original untouched version ...

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but I'm still happy with the shot, even though it has been ps'd.

The other 2 were pretty much as is, with a bit of sharpening and curves adjustment - other than that, they haven't changed.

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Re: Adelaide Zoo

Postby Geoff M on Sat Jan 16, 2010 9:56 am

Another vote for the leopard shot..great PP skills Rel :D
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Re: Adelaide Zoo

Postby lightning on Sat Jan 16, 2010 4:06 pm

Yeah they are great shots, I like the fox but I wonder if you crop out the fore ground and the black bits on either side, I think it would create a lot more impact.
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Re: Adelaide Zoo

Postby marcotrov on Sat Jan 16, 2010 4:45 pm

The leopard image is terrific. A great example of seeing 'photographically' Rel. Beautifully worked image that really accentuates the subject and its spirit. :)
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Re: Adelaide Zoo

Postby blacknstormy on Sat Jan 16, 2010 10:54 pm

Thanks again guys :)
Lightning, I'll have a look ... I was kind of using that space to lead you into the fox in it's hiding spot.. they are a really small animal, and I wanted to give that impression in the placement in the photo .. that made sense in my head anyway ;)
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Re: Adelaide Zoo

Postby Bindii on Sat Jan 16, 2010 11:15 pm

They are all fantastic shots... but the Leopard one is just stunning... and I'm even more impressed now I've seen the original.. superb pp'ing!! :)
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Re: Adelaide Zoo

Postby surenj on Sun Jan 17, 2010 12:23 am

+1 for the leopard and the brilliant PS!! :up:
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Re: Adelaide Zoo

Postby AttoJones on Thu Jan 21, 2010 5:27 pm

yes i love the leopard shot very much. stunning creatures, well captured.

also i agree on the comment of perhaps framing the fox a little, seems a little overrun by its surrounds.
but a nice shot none the less.
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Re: Adelaide Zoo

Postby ATJ on Fri Jan 22, 2010 4:52 pm

I missed these before, Rel. I don't know why.

I love all 3 shots, but the leopard is a real standout. The processing you have done is brilliant and without seeing the original, you'd never know it was a caged animal - perhaps you could enter it in Wildlife Photographer of the Year. They'd never know - well not initially.

I think I would prefer the fox shot more if it was a little less contrasty. I'm not really a fan of high key for nature shots, but that might just be me.
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