Bedroom Glamor with Bec NSFW

[fhphoto]

Hope you guys like these, as usual C&C welcome




and behind the scene

[Marvin]

I really like the second one. The things behind her head and body (bed?) are a bit distracting for me in the first. Thanks for the setup shot. I always find them interesting.

[biggerry]

Hope you guys like these, as usual C&C welcome

lol heres an idea, maybe you should critique some images here given the standard of your images and the fact that you run workshops?!

Also, and i speak purely for me here, but maybe posting the identical post over 4 different australian forums is (imo) diluting your potential response. I know I feel more inclined to give my time to critique , with my limited skills, when i dont see the same thing over all the forums I view (mods if you feel this comment is inappropriate feel free to slap me down).

[sheepie]

I don't normally comment on this style of shot, as I just don't have something useful to add usually...

But in this post, you've taken the time and effort to show your setup - most don't bother - and that's a great addition to what you're sharing. For those of us that don't do this sort of thing, an insight into setup/equipment/etc is invaluable - thanks

I quite like both of the shots -

I am not sure on the pose in the first one I think though - her left arm looks cut off to me - the pose looks a little un-natural - my mind says her arm should be forward more rather than behind her. Not necessarily in front, but not behind. I like the lighting and everything else about it though.

The second one - don't have a critique, other than to say it looks like she's been caught up to no good (there is an element of surprise/shock in her gaze).


Thanks again for sharing the setup - makes this post much more than just a showpiece

[jethro]

Great skin tones! nicely executed

Jethro

[surenj]

Nicely done Frank.

How are you managing the flash ratios while shooting on aperture priority and manual flash control? [Or are you using TTL; if so, which triggers are you using?]

[fhphoto]

Thanks for the comments everyone,

Yes, I was using ETTL, ratio was about 1:4 (not sure), trigger was a Canon ST-E2

[fhphoto]

Here is one more that the model had picked

[Matt. K]

First image is very beautiful and an exercise in good taste. Something often missing in this genre of photography. Good work.