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Brissy meet-Sheri

Postby Big Red on Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:01 am

Sheri was also easy to work with and up for anything ...
I really have to watch my flash position as i spoiled several better shots with strange shadows :oops:
Also should have made better use of her tatts as that is her thing, i need to pick out the girls features and explore them.

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Re: Brissy meet-Sherry

Postby zafra52 on Sun Feb 21, 2010 12:57 pm

I like the last three. The first one makes me
think of a funeral.
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Re: Brissy meet-Sherry

Postby Bob G on Sun Feb 21, 2010 6:46 pm

I like them all with the exception of #2 where the pose is a bit unflattering.
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Re: Brissy meet-Sherry

Postby Big Red on Sun Feb 21, 2010 8:09 pm

Thanks guys,
No 2 I was trying for the "I dont care" attitude to go with the Tatts.
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Re: Brissy meet-Sherry

Postby biggerry on Sun Feb 21, 2010 11:17 pm

#1 all the way, I think a slightly different angle would have made this image perfect! ie rotated 45 deg CW.

A tight crop on Sherry's head and shoulders on the last would also be great, she has got a great expression and it shows off here artwork nicely...

great to see some different stuff Big Red :up: :up:
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