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Sweet Corn Fritters with Smoked Salmon

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Sweet Corn Fritters with Smoked Salmon

Postby Bob G on Wed Mar 10, 2010 3:39 pm

This was taken indoors under natural light

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Re: Sweet Corn Fritters with Smoked Salmon

Postby DebT on Wed Mar 10, 2010 7:05 pm

Foods just not that easy to shoot but you've done very well, salmon looks nice and fresh , interesting colors and textures and the second is nicely blurred in the background - looks yummy
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Re: Sweet Corn Fritters with Smoked Salmon

Postby Mr Darcy on Thu Mar 11, 2010 9:24 am

I can't help but think there needs to be a little more detail in the garnish. Otherwise well done.
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Re: Sweet Corn Fritters with Smoked Salmon

Postby Bob G on Thu Mar 11, 2010 9:13 pm

Mr Darcy wrote:I can't help but think there needs to be a little more detail in the garnish. Otherwise well done.

Agreed - and thanks for showing interest.
I noticed the food left on the table after my wife had had a couple of ladies for morning tea. The dill was probably a bit limp at that stage but I wanted to try for the first time my new zeiss Makro planar 100 f2 and a white balance "Lally cap".

I would have given more emphasis to the setup and detail should I have had a specific purpose for the image other than to test these two items.

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Re: Sweet Corn Fritters with Smoked Salmon

Postby Alex on Thu Mar 11, 2010 10:28 pm

Nicely done, Bob.

I like the lighting and the DoF. I am not sure about the lace in the foreground, I think it steals some of the attention.

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