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Black Rain (NWS)

Postby wendellt on Thu Apr 01, 2010 1:34 am

some from a recent fashion campaign

recipe
main light beauty dish straight fill.
right side blue gel
last 2 images
to the leftgelled red light
to the right gelled blue light
beauty dish fill straight on - the beauty dish fill fixes up some shadows from the harsh side light and mutes the gels so the overal lighting looks mixed and smoothed
1/250 f4 iso 100

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Re: Black Rain (NWS)

Postby Big V on Thu Apr 01, 2010 5:22 pm

Love the third shot Wendel. The catch lights in the second, dont know if they worry me or not - different though..
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Re: Black Rain (NWS)

Postby aim54x on Thu Apr 01, 2010 5:45 pm

Amazing work there Wendell.

I think she needs a different set of sunnies to complete the Matrix look though.
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Re: Black Rain (NWS)

Postby Geoff on Thu Apr 01, 2010 7:49 pm

Nice job again Wendell!
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Re: Black Rain (NWS)

Postby biggerry on Thu Apr 01, 2010 8:14 pm

Nice stuff Wendell, not much to add from a critique point of view expect for teh first maybe including her other foot in the frame?

Ta for the lighting setup too :up:
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Re: Black Rain (NWS)

Postby photomarcs on Sat Apr 03, 2010 11:04 pm

2nd shot is the winner for me =) great composition =)

Number 1... i'm not too sure about the crop.. but i'm mighty jealous of your control of light =D
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Re: Black Rain (NWS)

Postby Alex on Sat Apr 03, 2010 11:21 pm

Excellent work as usual, Wendell.

Love how natural the light looks in all of the images despite of using multiple sources.

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