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Postby wendellt on Thu Apr 01, 2010 10:20 pm

this is an advertising pitch i helped a friend with to win the Jets swimwear fashion campaign

all shot with available light with careful emphasis on model placement

shot with a 8 star filter
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Re: Jets

Postby brentsky on Thu Apr 01, 2010 11:18 pm

awesome set! the 4th is the winner for me..
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Re: Jets

Postby DebT on Fri Apr 02, 2010 7:00 am

always good to learn from the creative way you use what's on hand
- I like the sun in the 1st (but the angle makes her look a bit hippy), and the last is just a great color fun shot ,
But #4 using the steel work shadow on her leg is a real winner
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Re: Jets

Postby photomarcs on Fri Apr 02, 2010 9:00 am

#4 is the winner for me =D

great stuff Wendellt!

I'll agree to Deb's comment on the first one being hippy.. but it's not the main focus my eye gets drawn to. But it just goes to show, how it still works quite well as a whole =D

keep on trucking Wendellt!
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Re: Jets

Postby LostDingo2 on Sun Apr 04, 2010 9:42 pm

That last image is great. The middle girls eyes are absolutely stunning.
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Re: Jets

Postby kiwi on Mon Apr 05, 2010 8:04 am

awesome fun, looks so mediterranean
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Re: Jets

Postby biggerry on Mon Apr 05, 2010 10:20 am

careful emphasis on model placement


and this is very evident in 2 and 3, great use of the surrounds there wendell.

I like the last one too very natural expressions! only CC would be maybe a diagonal composition?
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