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AJ - Images added (Slightly NSFW)My first shoot with AJ... but definitely not my last...
Last edited by leek on Fri Apr 16, 2010 2:01 am, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: AJ (Slightly NSFW)Nice. I like the contrast between model and grafitti. I helped a friend do a shoot with the same concept some time back for Ralph magazine. Where was the location?
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Thanks Raskill... It was at a WW2 bunker in Malabar. A very well used photographic location, but each time, the grafitti is different, so you're never quite sure what you're gonna get... By pure coincidence, the colour scheme matched the jewellery I'd brought along Cheers, John
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however the chosen poses of the model really make this interaction work, they fill the frame but still capture some good graf. nice shots John. gerry's photography journey
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Re: AJ (Slightly NSFW)Thanks Gerry... glad you liked them... Cheers, John
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Re: AJ (Slightly NSFW)Artistic, creative, great lighting - overall excellent.
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Re: AJ (Slightly NSFW)These are artfully done. John, I can see the quality of you work is going up from an already high quality baseline!
Re: AJ (Slightly NSFW)I really like these, except I find the position of her front foot in the second one a little off putting, seems a little unnatural to me.
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Re: AJ - Images added (Slightly NSFW)A few more...
Last edited by leek on Sun Apr 18, 2010 1:29 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Re: AJ - Images added (Slightly NSFW)cute model. #3(edit : I meant #5) is a stunner good work john!
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Re: AJ - Images added (Slightly NSFW)John, the final one in the second batch is very nice, I like that pose and I reckon the leg position is neat. However the first two I think need some more work.
#1, the dynamic skin smoother or whatever software used to smooth the skin has gone a bit crazy here, the edges of her arm also look strange, I think the pose works but the fact that you cannot see her underwear (lower) is a bit strange in this case, I think being able to see it would have been better.. #2 the only real gripe about this one is the way the image looks with regard to teh face/head size in relation to the body size.. the head 'looks' a bit big... thoughts? gerry's photography journey
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you might be right... there is a bit of a halo... I'll have another go at it... Oh - and she wasn't wearing any underwear - that's why you can't see it Cheers, John
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a bit of a halo? Hell, that one is so oversharpened I just cut my finger and there's now blood all over the keyboard! Yes, John, pull back on the sharpening a little on this one, if you could. g.
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Hahah... what were you doing with your fingers there Gary Actually gerry was right... it wasn't sharpening, but my skin smoothing routine that did it... She doesn't need skin smoothing anyway - Now fixed... Cheers, John
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