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Night Rider

Postby kiwi on Tue Apr 27, 2010 10:33 am

Just a bit of practice and fun to share

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Re: Night Rider

Postby Mr Darcy on Tue Apr 27, 2010 10:58 am

Nice concept & reasonable execution.
I'd take the houses right to silhouette. In particular the bright dot near the centre, and the "tail" coming out of the helmet. It would be nice if the line of the houses were cleaner too. I see a ghost fringe on it.
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Re: Night Rider

Postby surenj on Tue Apr 27, 2010 1:45 pm

Nice concept and framing. In addition to what's being said, I would clean up the light on the left lower of the frame.
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