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Our feathered friends

Postby Big V on Mon May 03, 2010 12:57 am

Another afternoon watching these guys have a ball..
Love the bokeh on this one, was lucky that the gull was close and provided good separation between it and the water
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Feasting away
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Take off
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Afternoon landing
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Re: Our feathered friends

Postby biggerry on Mon May 03, 2010 10:18 am

gull was close and provided good separation between it and the water


yeah that is pretty premo! I also like the inclusion of the little bit of food or scrap that he/she has dropped in the lower right!

I also liek the pelican takeoff shot, its astounding to see these things get off the water :). My only suggestion with this one would be a bit of extra room on the left hand side so the bird is in teh centre?
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Re: Our feathered friends

Postby spesh on Mon May 03, 2010 12:48 pm

Great shots... love the last pelican landing shot :)
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Re: Our feathered friends

Postby Big V on Mon May 03, 2010 11:50 pm

Gerry, that breaks the rule of thirds :)
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Re: Our feathered friends

Postby biggerry on Tue May 04, 2010 3:01 pm

Big V wrote:Gerry, that breaks the rule of thirds


(this is gonna get academic.. :lol: )

how so?

As I see this image the eye of the bird intersects the top left 'power point' (interesection of the third lines), which in my opinion, in this case, would better intersecting the main subject - the whole bird (since eye contact is probably not super critical at this distance). So how are you intrepreting the rule of thirds?

Now, if one was to move the bird to the right and intersect the body with the top right 'power point' you would (still?) 'obey' the rule of thirds and also 'obey' the rule of having space in front of the moving subject :wink:

Note: I am not having a dig at you - more trying to understand, so if I am missing the bleeding obvious bear with me :roll:
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Postby gstark on Tue May 04, 2010 6:52 pm

Big V wrote:Gerry, that breaks the rule of thirds :)


Well, if we want to be picky, one might say that the bird is currently in the "wrong" third, and perhaps needs to be further to the right as we're viewing the image, so that it has "room" to move within the image frame.

Alternately, Matt might chime in with his classic advice. :)
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Re: Our feathered friends

Postby Big V on Wed May 05, 2010 1:52 am

I agree with you that the eye of the bird is in the third at the left and top, which is why I have framed it like this. When watching this take off, the water which is left behind was of more interest to me than where the bird was going. I do not have much to play with as this is basically how it was shot but will have another look and see if I can use one of the other frames in the sequence to see if it does make a difference.
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Postby gstark on Wed May 05, 2010 8:41 am

Big V wrote:When watching this take off, the water which is left behind was of more interest to me than where the bird was


Fair eniugh, and in which case, perhaps a slightly wider angle - something giving a less tight crop - may have been helpful.

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