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Re: The Header and the haircut
I find your background distracting in all these shots. Also, you are too far from the action. #2 could be a corker except for these two issues.
Some options: Crop harder Shoot with a wider aperture Get closer Use a longer lens Get lower so you are shooting against the sky. Choose a different spot so you have a blander background With #1 try cropping vertically. Lose the player to the left. He doesn't contribute to the shot. And the Pole to the right. Greg
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The Header and the haircut
What gerleaf you using tc ?
Sent from my iPhone using Tapatalk Darren
Nikon D3 and Nikon Glass
Re: The Header and the haircut
gerleaf? if you mean gear?
D700, 70-200VRII and TC1.7 II
Re: The Header and the haircut
ahh yeah, silly iPhone
I have that gear myself if you swap the d700 for a d3 Its OK for soccer, but you do have to wait until the action comes close, I cant see your EXIF but at say 5.6 the DOF is becoming a bit too much for good subject isolation unless they are right on top of you Good shots though - but as said crop tighter Darren
Nikon D3 and Nikon Glass
Re: The Header and the haircut
The second shot is a cracker - brings tears to your eyes
Canon
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