Playing with grain

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Playing with grain

Postby BullcreekBob on Mon May 17, 2010 1:46 pm

I don't usually like grain or noise in colour images but I go through phases of liking and disliking grain in B/W but have not yet worked out which approach best suits my style of images (if indeed I have a *style*).

I would like some feedback on these three images, one with little grain, one with lots and one somewhere in the middle.

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Re: Playing with grain

Postby surenj on Mon May 17, 2010 2:09 pm

BullcreekBob wrote:(if indeed I have a *style*).

Everyone has a style Bob. :wink:

I think grain if used should help portray the message that you are giving. Perhaps it could be timelessness, old age or desolation.

I am not convinced that excessive noise in a portrait could be that useful. For example in #2. The lady's face looks like it's blending into the wall which is also textured similarly.

#3 I can only see grain in the background. It's a great moment that you have captured though.
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Re: Playing with grain

Postby Ant on Mon May 17, 2010 2:27 pm

Bob, to me the Grain in #2 looks artificial and adds little to the image.
The little grain in #3 seems to go with the subjects mood.
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Re: Playing with grain

Postby hann_sze on Mon May 17, 2010 9:42 pm

the last picture has the perfect mood! added with the desaturated black and white!

i love B&W photography!
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Re: Playing with grain

Postby biggerry on Mon May 17, 2010 10:38 pm

I think grain if used should help portray the message that you are giving. Perhaps it could be timelessness, old age or desolation.


:agree:

grain is a technique/process that I reckon only works with a small portion of images, the composition and subject have to be just right, thinking back, I cannot recall the specific images, but I have only seen less than a handfull of digital images which have grain that I went 'wow'.

I don't any of these images require an extra PP or in this case grain to give them the extra 'pop' more to the point I think none really suit grain application.

The first image is very pleasant, invokes some thought in teh viewer (me anyway) and is a nice composition, I woudl however crop some of teh dead space on the bottom and right, this might also help balance the image?
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Re: Playing with grain

Postby Mr Darcy on Tue May 18, 2010 12:03 pm

#1 could be improved with a softer light. Perhaps just a reflector, image right, to define the shape of the head.
Otherwise great photo.

#2 Way too much noise here. She looks diseased. Or perhaps way too little. Iff you were going for a camouflage look.

#3 this works much better. Perhaps a little more noise could be added, but only to the background.

This is a photo that came up a few years ago that I felt made REALLY good use of noise.
http://www.dslrusers.com/viewtopic.php?f=18&t=33772&start=0&st=0&sk=t&sd=a#p366205

Like others, I think that noise is a tool to be used sparingly if at all. Only use it: 1. if it is inherent in the picture & you can't get rid of it (Like BlacknStormys above) or 2. if it really suits the mood you are trying to portray. Then use just barely enough. Personally I would use it only if it met both criteria. If it only met #1 I would ditch the photo.

This is one I took. http://www.dslrusers.com/viewtopic.php?f=18&t=39067&start=0&st=0&sk=t&sd=a#p411503
The grain was inherent in the photo to start with. I removed it for the original post & put it back (i.e. started again from the original RAW) after feedback indicated it might be a good idea - and it was!
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Re: Playing with grain

Postby photomarcs on Tue May 18, 2010 12:05 pm

biggerry wrote:
I think grain if used should help portray the message that you are giving. Perhaps it could be timelessness, old age or desolation.


:agree:

grain is a technique/process that I reckon only works with a small portion of images, the composition and subject have to be just right, thinking back, I cannot recall the specific images, but I have only seen less than a handfull of digital images which have grain that I went 'wow'.

I don't any of these images require an extra PP or in this case grain to give them the extra 'pop' more to the point I think none really suit grain application.

The first image is very pleasant, invokes some thought in teh viewer (me anyway) and is a nice composition, I woudl however crop some of teh dead space on the bottom and right, this might also help balance the image?

:agree: :agree:


grain in the third really adds to the feel of the image, some form of emotional attachment or a remeniscent vibe. The grain is wonderfully presented to compliment the image rather than to be the main idea. :up:

I'll also agree with the dead space on the bottom and right of the first image, just my opinion anyways. :cheers:

Great judgement on grain though!
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Re: Playing with grain

Postby biggerry on Tue May 18, 2010 1:10 pm

Mr Darcy, they are two very fine examples, exactly what I was thinking of!

man some u old folk actually have pretty good memories... :twisted:
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