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Postby wendellt on Sun May 23, 2010 7:56 pm

some images from a fashion Editorial

i the styling is pretty eclectic so i thought if i keep the energy and spirit in each shot that expressiveness would gel the whole concept together

lighting 2x profoto strip boxes on either side of subject
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Re: Vivacious

Postby photomarcs on Sun May 23, 2010 8:15 pm

Oh how i envy how sharp you're images are.. haha ahh... your umbrella one is so... *envy growing*..

love these images dude! number one's got the best colors IMO, they really compliment each other well !
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Re: Vivacious

Postby ian.bertram on Sun May 23, 2010 10:43 pm

Yes, but number four has the lighting on the face absolutely nailed. It's a natural look and works beautifully with the image (more elegance and flow). Nice work.
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Re: Vivacious

Postby biggerry on Mon May 24, 2010 1:47 pm

i the styling is pretty eclectic so i thought if i keep the energy and spirit in each shot that expressiveness would gel the whole concept together


exactly, the combination of capturing the movement and action coupled with the fantastic models and costumes really make these something more that oridinary pictures! :up: :up:

as always wendell, top stuff.
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Re: Vivacious

Postby Ant on Mon May 24, 2010 2:12 pm

These almost look like they could have been drawn rather than photographed... amazing!
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Re: Vivacious

Postby photomarcs on Mon May 24, 2010 2:26 pm

ian.bertram wrote:Yes, but number four has the lighting on the face absolutely nailed. It's a natural look and works beautifully with the image (more elegance and flow). Nice work.

:agree:

the colors here are full of life, the dramatic colors really go pop!

I guess i should rephrase my previous statement, the colors in number one flow really nicely in my opinion, the tones aren't striking but they aren't dead either, it's something you could look at day in and day out without it hurting your eyes or being boring, It's an everyday image that's not so everyday :mrgreen:

Ant wrote:These almost look like they could have been drawn rather than photographed... amazing!


Maybe we should get Wendell to draw it :rotfl2:
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