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Fire in the sky

Postby surenj on Sat Jul 03, 2010 12:27 pm

I Was lucky enough to witness a pretty decent sunset recently. Managed to rush to Belmont just in time for the good light which lasted only for 5 minutes. This place is very peaceful during sunset and is highly recommended visit if you are in the area.

There was a wedding photographer doing a few shots but they left before the nice light! :roll:

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Re: Fire in the sky

Postby Killakoala on Sat Jul 03, 2010 7:19 pm

Very purty and dramatic too. The use of very-wide focal length really adds a nice punch to the image.
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Re: Fire in the sky

Postby glamy on Sat Jul 03, 2010 8:47 pm

The long exposure adds a bit of drama to the clouds. Well captured. :up:
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Re: Fire in the sky

Postby photomarcs on Sat Jul 03, 2010 9:37 pm

Dude, creative genius at work ay ? hahaha

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Re: Fire in the sky

Postby aim54x on Sat Jul 03, 2010 10:05 pm

Looks great. talk about being at the right place at the right time!
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Re: Fire in the sky

Postby biggerry on Sun Jul 04, 2010 5:28 pm

not too shabby for someone :arrow:

yet he has very little photographic experience and does not post a lot of images


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Nice stuff Suren, it looks very representative of the scene but has some nice dynamic range, i do not have much to add than that. Maybe a pano style might have been an option? would definitely need extra shots since you would not want to lose any of that sky or foreground...

I can spot some lens spots on the filter there (i think), you were using a small aperture? I often get similiar spots but not 100% sure how to avoid other than using larger aperture...
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Re: Fire in the sky

Postby PiroStitch on Sun Jul 04, 2010 7:13 pm

Great work Suren. Looks like you caught the magic and the wedding photog didn't, luck of the game :)

Love the way the clouds look.
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Re: Fire in the sky

Postby surenj on Sun Jul 04, 2010 8:48 pm

Thanks killakoala, glamy for your comments.

aim54x wrote:talk about being at the right place at the right time!

This was taken on the 26th when you were in NC... :wink:

biggerry wrote:not too shabby for someone
yet he has very little photographic experience and does not post a lot of images

This could still be true though... :wink:

photomarcs wrote:Love love love the venetian masks you have in your album

Thanks Marc, but which ones??? :?: I didn't think I had any.

biggerry wrote:Maybe a pano style might have been an option? would definitely need extra shots since you would not want to lose any of that sky or foreground...

Didn't think of that. There aren't many more foreground focal points in this scene but that may not matter for a pano as much. Hmm.. Next time. Thanks for the suggestion.

biggerry wrote:I can spot some lens spots on the filter there (i think), you were using a small aperture?

Those are rain drops. :mrgreen: I hung around a little more despite the rain for this shot. They often say that the last shot is best. I think that was true in this case!

PiroStitch wrote:wedding photog didn't, luck of the game

Perhaps! Maybe they moved to another location though. Yeah, I was just relaxing by the lake while they were working hard I guess. :P


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Re: Fire in the sky

Postby biggerry on Mon Jul 05, 2010 10:05 am

photomarcs wrote:Dude, creative genius at work ay ? hahaha

Love love love the venetian masks you have in your album, the colors and detail are amazing! I think.. professionally I'd also like to note myself as a "venetian mask product photographer" haha ultimate job


I must be really slow...did I miss something in that picture? :roll:
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Re: Fire in the sky

Postby big pix on Mon Jul 05, 2010 1:15 pm

Some nice colour in this image, ........ if you know how to use Photoshop you can straighten the verticals in this image....... a change of exposure and f stop would have improved the water movement. More detail in the wharf would also have helped. The sign "Public Access Jetty" and white small pole above distracts from the overall look.......
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Re: Fire in the sky

Postby surenj on Tue Jul 06, 2010 12:32 pm

Thanks Big pix.

I will have a go at strightening the verticals.

Are you suggesting more or less water movement? I was unable to get the shutter any lower without blowing the highlights in the -2EV image so had to make do. [My wideangle filterholder only holds one filter - in this case it could have been the ND8 or reverse ND grad - can't remember]

Agree that a little bit more detail on the jetty would be good. I will have another look at my brackets.

The white small pole is a compositional issue and I haven't yet found a balanced composition in this location which doesn't include it. As you know this location well, I will keep an eye out for your compositions. :cheers:
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Re: Fire in the sky

Postby devilla101 on Tue Jul 06, 2010 4:09 pm

oooh sexy :)
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