Today's portraits

Got a thin skin? Then look elsewhere. Post a link to an image that you've made, and invite others to offer their critiques. Honesty is encouraged, but please be positive in your constructive criticism. Flaming and just plain nastiness will not be tolerated. Please note that this is not an area for you to showcase your images, nor is this a place for you to show-off where you have been. This is an area for you to post images so that you may share with us a technique that you have mastered, or are trying to master. Typically, no more than about four images should be posted in any one post or thread, and the maximum size of any side of any image should not exceed 950 px.

Moderators: Greg B, Nnnnsic, Geoff, Glen, gstark, Moderators

Forum rules
Please note that image critiquing is a matter of give and take: if you post images for critique, and you then expect to receive criticism, then it is also reasonable, fair and appropriate that, in return, you post your critique of the images of other members here as a matter of courtesy. So please do offer your critique of the images of others; your opinion is important, and will help everyone here enjoy their visit to far greater extent.

Also please note that, unless you state something to the contrary, other members might attempt to repost your image with their own post processing applied. We see this as an acceptable form of critique, but should you prefer that others not modify your work, this is perfectly ok, and you should state this, either within your post, or within your signature.

Images posted here should conform with the general forum guidelines. Image sizes should not exceed 950 pixels along the largest side (height or width) and typically no more than four images per post or thread.

Please also ensure that you have a meaningful location included in your profile. Please refer to the FAQ for details of what "meaningful" is.

Today's portraits

Postby ozimax on Mon Sep 20, 2010 8:24 pm

Took a day off today and drove (in the rain) to the Promised Land, near Bellingen. A beautiful day for photography, as long as you can dodge the rain. (A disposable shower cap is a handy bit of gear in the rain). Here's a few images from the day, and as usual, all comments welcomed. All taken with available light, 70-200 F/2.8 + 5D Mkii handheld.

Image

Image

Image

Image
President, A.A.A.A.A (Australian Association Against Acronym Abuse)
Canon EOS R6, RF 24-105 F4, RF 70-200 F4, RF 35mm F1.8, RF 16mm F2.8
"And ye shall know the truth, and the truth shall make you free." (John 8:32)
User avatar
ozimax
Senior Member
 
Posts: 5289
Joined: Wed Jan 05, 2005 11:58 am
Location: Coffs Harbour, NSW

Re: Today's portraits

Postby surenj on Tue Sep 21, 2010 12:25 am

ozimax wrote:as long as you can dodge the rain.

Optech rain sleeve.. :wink: + a shower cap if you really want to look fashionable.

Although I would like the negative space without the car, I really like #1. The expression is relaxed and light (As in all these shots) beautiful. The bokeh is to die for.

The others shots while being technically very nice, is let down a little by very subtle awkwardness of the posture.

Actually #4 looks like a relaxed smile as well...

Is she getting a little more relaxed in front of the camera?
User avatar
surenj
Senior Member
 
Posts: 7197
Joined: Fri Sep 15, 2006 8:21 pm
Location: Artarmon NSW

Re: Today's portraits

Postby Remorhaz on Tue Sep 21, 2010 2:01 pm

Yes I'd have to say #1 is my fave too. I love the lighting in this particular shot.

What focal length and aperture were you using for these shots?
D600, D7000, Nikon/Sigma/Tamron Lenses, Nikon Flashes, Sirui/Manfrotto/Benro Sticks
Rodney - My Photo Blog
Want: Fast Wide (14|20|24)
User avatar
Remorhaz
Senior Member
 
Posts: 2547
Joined: Thu Apr 29, 2010 8:14 pm
Location: Sydney - Lower North Shore - D600

Re: Today's portraits

Postby biggerry on Tue Sep 21, 2010 2:39 pm

Ozi.. beautiful soft light in these!
gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
User avatar
biggerry
Senior Member
 
Posts: 5930
Joined: Tue May 13, 2008 12:40 am
Location: Under the flight path, Newtown, Sydney

Re: Today's portraits

Postby Reschsmooth on Tue Sep 21, 2010 3:44 pm

The lighting in the first two is superb. The 3rd is good, although the 4th looks more flat. You have really taken advantage of the light conditions in the first 2-3.

The poses look natural which is nice. Complementary to the images.

My only negative critique is the use of the car in the shot - it doesn't seem to add anything and, in fact, looks like it is an unavoidable part of the background. If it is meant to be part of the shot, I would prefer to see it in a little clearer focus. Particulalry if it was one of these. :D
Regards, Patrick

Two or three lights, any lens on a light-tight box are sufficient for the realisation of the most convincing image. Man Ray 1935.
Our mug is smug
User avatar
Reschsmooth
Senior Member
 
Posts: 4164
Joined: Tue Aug 01, 2006 2:16 pm
Location: Just next to S'nives.

Re: Today's portraits

Postby ozimax on Wed Sep 22, 2010 12:25 pm

surenj wrote:Optech rain sleeve.. :wink: + a shower cap if you really want to look fashionable.

It really was a win/loss situation. The Promised Land near Bellingen, only a short drive from where we live, is the most beautiful place imaginable. The rainy skies brought an even, almost surreal light, but with it was the problem of getting my gear wet, not to mention the wife!

surenj wrote:Although I would like the negative space without the car

I was actually moving quite fast as we had a small break in the weather and funnily enough, I didn't even notice our car in the background.

surenj wrote:Is she getting a little more relaxed in front of the camera?

Yes and no, sometimes yes and sometimes no, depending on whether or not she is relaxed... :lol: :?:
President, A.A.A.A.A (Australian Association Against Acronym Abuse)
Canon EOS R6, RF 24-105 F4, RF 70-200 F4, RF 35mm F1.8, RF 16mm F2.8
"And ye shall know the truth, and the truth shall make you free." (John 8:32)
User avatar
ozimax
Senior Member
 
Posts: 5289
Joined: Wed Jan 05, 2005 11:58 am
Location: Coffs Harbour, NSW

Re: Today's portraits

Postby ozimax on Wed Sep 22, 2010 12:26 pm

biggerry wrote:Ozi.. beautiful soft light in these!


Thanks Gerry, yep, the light is 50% of portrait photography, facial expression etc is the other 49%. Gear is 1%.
President, A.A.A.A.A (Australian Association Against Acronym Abuse)
Canon EOS R6, RF 24-105 F4, RF 70-200 F4, RF 35mm F1.8, RF 16mm F2.8
"And ye shall know the truth, and the truth shall make you free." (John 8:32)
User avatar
ozimax
Senior Member
 
Posts: 5289
Joined: Wed Jan 05, 2005 11:58 am
Location: Coffs Harbour, NSW

Re: Today's portraits

Postby ozimax on Wed Sep 22, 2010 12:27 pm

Reschsmooth wrote:My only negative critique is the use of the car in the shot


I think you're correct here Patrick, and may take out the car and re-post the image.
President, A.A.A.A.A (Australian Association Against Acronym Abuse)
Canon EOS R6, RF 24-105 F4, RF 70-200 F4, RF 35mm F1.8, RF 16mm F2.8
"And ye shall know the truth, and the truth shall make you free." (John 8:32)
User avatar
ozimax
Senior Member
 
Posts: 5289
Joined: Wed Jan 05, 2005 11:58 am
Location: Coffs Harbour, NSW

Re: Today's portraits

Postby ozimax on Wed Sep 22, 2010 12:30 pm

Remorhaz wrote:Yes I'd have to say #1 is my fave too. I love the lighting in this particular shot.

What focal length and aperture were you using for these shots?


F4, 1/125 sec, ISO 500 @ 80mm. Hope this helps.
President, A.A.A.A.A (Australian Association Against Acronym Abuse)
Canon EOS R6, RF 24-105 F4, RF 70-200 F4, RF 35mm F1.8, RF 16mm F2.8
"And ye shall know the truth, and the truth shall make you free." (John 8:32)
User avatar
ozimax
Senior Member
 
Posts: 5289
Joined: Wed Jan 05, 2005 11:58 am
Location: Coffs Harbour, NSW

Re: Today's portraits

Postby ozimax on Wed Sep 22, 2010 12:31 pm

surenj wrote:The bokeh is to die for.


Actually Suren, I don't think you can improve on the 70-200 2.8. There's just something about this lens and the images it churns out that makes the cost and weight worth every penny.
President, A.A.A.A.A (Australian Association Against Acronym Abuse)
Canon EOS R6, RF 24-105 F4, RF 70-200 F4, RF 35mm F1.8, RF 16mm F2.8
"And ye shall know the truth, and the truth shall make you free." (John 8:32)
User avatar
ozimax
Senior Member
 
Posts: 5289
Joined: Wed Jan 05, 2005 11:58 am
Location: Coffs Harbour, NSW


Return to Image Reviews and Critiques