Newie Baths - leg one of Photo Safari

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Newie Baths - leg one of Photo Safari

Postby biggerry on Mon Sep 20, 2010 12:19 am

Man getting up at 4:15am hurt...

The bizarre thing was, there were people in the baths at the ungodly hour we got there...I enjoy a paddle in the pool, but this is commitment!

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I know what this bloke as thinking... 'eekk mummy, this is gonna hurt'

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Re: Newie Baths - leg one of Photo Safari

Postby Mr Darcy on Mon Sep 20, 2010 7:47 am

#1 POTY
#2 POTM
#3 POTW
#4 Nah doesn't do it for me. At least not in this company
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Re: Newie Baths - leg one of Photo Safari

Postby radar on Mon Sep 20, 2010 9:17 am

Wow Gerry,

Love #2 and #3, great story in number 2 and the light in #3, you have captured it beautifully.

I agree, the 4am start is certainly harsh!!
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Re: Newie Baths - leg one of Photo Safari

Postby gstark on Mon Sep 20, 2010 10:01 am

Gerry,

#3 is great .....

but ....

How about a square crop? cut it too the left of the arched structure, keeping the wall on the right?

How about a pano crop? Look at the reflection in the water of the arched structure. Now look at the top of the image; Crop from the bottom so that area beyond the reflection is basically the same height as the sky is, at the top.
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Re: Newie Baths - leg one of Photo Safari

Postby aim54x on Mon Sep 20, 2010 10:19 pm

Mr Darcy wrote:#1 POTY
#2 POTM
#3 POTW
#4 Nah doesn't do it for me. At least not in this company

:biglaugh: somehow I agree!!
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Re: Newie Baths - leg one of Photo Safari

Postby biggerry on Mon Sep 20, 2010 10:48 pm

Mr Darcy wrote:#1 POTY
#2 POTM
#3 POTW


nah, definitely not

gstark wrote:How about a pano crop?


ahhh..the pano crop...

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I actually was not a fan of the image - i was looking to get more definition o fthe greens in the foreground..

another different angle on the same theme, I love the transition of the sky colours and the surreal nature of the lack of shadows..

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Re: Newie Baths - leg one of Photo Safari

Postby surenj on Tue Sep 21, 2010 12:12 am

Dude that swimmer is rather primo! Love how there is that really contrasty feel to the shadows when you use that 300.

#2 Those waves were truly huge and great stuff in capturing that. Light on his face as well! :cheers:

#3 looks too surreal to be my cup of tea. I reckon you should break your rule and try to manually dodge and burn a little to see whether you can also have a few shadows in the image.

You are getting very good at hiding those grads. :cheers: My 4 stopper usually sticks out like a sore thumb. I think 3 stops is probably the best compromise although the sun gets blown out quite a bit.

#4 the shutter is too long so it's weakened by the non-dynamic water action. :wink:
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Re: Newie Baths - leg one of Photo Safari

Postby biggerry on Thu Sep 23, 2010 11:35 pm

surenj wrote:Dude that swimmer is rather primo! Love how there is that really contrasty feel to the shadows when you use that 300.


yep can't fault that 300, its a very very nice lens and such contrast! I love it.

Those waves were truly huge and great stuff in capturing that. Light on his face as well!


yeah I took quite a few of slightly differing compositions to try and capture the scale of the waves - this was as close as I got.

surenj wrote:#3 looks too surreal to be my cup of tea. I reckon you should break your rule and try to manually dodge and burn a little to see whether you can also have a few shadows in the image.


fair call! shame we did not have more time on teh w/e, I am keen to see your workflow with lightroom - next time!

surenj wrote:You are getting very good at hiding those grads. My 4 stopper usually sticks out like a sore thumb. I think 3 stops is probably the best compromise although the sun gets blown out quite a bit.


yeah it surprising really, it is also a hard grad so I expected much more distinct changes when the horizon was not spot on flat...

surenj wrote:#4 the shutter is too long so it's weakened by the non-dynamic water action.


:cheers: its a hard balance to track down! ta for teh comments Suren.
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Re: Newie Baths - leg one of Photo Safari

Postby Willy wombat on Fri Sep 24, 2010 10:11 am

Real nice work!
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Re: Newie Baths - leg one of Photo Safari

Postby petermmc on Fri Sep 24, 2010 11:23 am

No 1 is in a class of its own. Best shot I have seen for a long time. Vibrant & Alive.

I like No 3 also despite it looking like a prop from Dr Who...which is a good thing. An earlier tardis perhaps..where is the master?

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Re: Newie Baths - leg one of Photo Safari

Postby wendellt on Fri Sep 24, 2010 2:54 pm

i think this is your best set
the tone of the images are just devine
and it's a really nice range of subjects
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