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smoke and baloons

Postby wendellt on Fri Sep 24, 2010 3:20 pm

this is a small lookbook job i did for a fashion client
just sharing because it was a shoestring budget job and with my styling i made it into something a bit more special

i used 1 beuty dish for the main light and 1 snooted strobe to light the smoke and 2 speedlights for additional background flashes which got toned down by the star filter i used on the lens

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Re: smoke and baloons

Postby robw25 on Fri Sep 24, 2010 6:02 pm

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i have been in awe of your work for years .. i always open you posts first , keep em comin

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Re: smoke and baloons

Postby zafra52 on Fri Sep 24, 2010 6:59 pm

Very interesting images. I think I prefer
the last one because it is a close up and
eliminates much of the background, but
I like them all.
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Re: smoke and baloons

Postby aim54x on Fri Sep 24, 2010 9:17 pm

Who needs a big budget anyway? Looking really good there
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Re: smoke and baloons

Postby Alex on Sat Sep 25, 2010 9:56 am

Great work Wendell, as usual! As has been said above, I always open your posts first. Love your work!

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Re: smoke and baloons

Postby surenj on Sat Sep 25, 2010 11:53 am

Wow! :bowdown:

These are just great!

Thanks for giving the lighting info. [Can see your key light on the balloons. The beauty dish has such beautiful light! ... :wink: )

Do you own your own smoke machine?
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Re: smoke and baloons

Postby wendellt on Sat Sep 25, 2010 12:01 pm

yeah i like the beauty dish

i dont own a smoke machine but there was a dj hire place right next door and decded to get on for $30 per hour

however i do have a foam machine snow machine

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Re: smoke and baloons

Postby Reschsmooth on Sat Sep 25, 2010 3:02 pm

Awesome work as usual. My only gripe is the reflections in the balloons - not sure how to alleviate, but perhaps underexposing slightly or even spraying some fine liquid on the balloons to disrupt the reflections. Small niggle.
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Re: smoke and baloons

Postby biggerry on Sat Sep 25, 2010 11:23 pm

awesome stuff wendell, lighting magic at its best - whats with teh second image though, she looks very short in that one, or is that an optical illusion?
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