Belanci 2010

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Belanci 2010

Postby wendellt on Fri Oct 01, 2010 10:38 pm

This is an advertising campaign i did for a shoe company
the concept is to show spontaneous in the moment capture of girls at a club so the lazy framing and is intentional
the ringflash was used to make it look more paparazzi but with an added luxe quality

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Re: Belanci 2010

Postby DebT on Sat Oct 02, 2010 8:58 am

Hi, like the overall quality / color/light but find that the eye contact with the camera is making it more about the girl not the shoes so would like to see them looking at the shoes, thus drawing my attention to the product
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Re: Belanci 2010

Postby aim54x on Mon Oct 04, 2010 8:49 pm

DebT wrote:Hi, like the overall quality / color/light but find that the eye contact with the camera is making it more about the girl not the shoes so would like to see them looking at the shoes, thus drawing my attention to the product
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Deb has a great point. I also find it strange that the shoes are cropped in a few of these, esp if they are the subject
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Re: Belanci 2010

Postby biggerry on Fri Oct 08, 2010 6:45 pm

DebT wrote:the eye contact with the camera is making it more about the girl not the shoes so would like to see them looking at the shoes,


eehh?? what shoes? :wink: :rotfl2:
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