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You know when you are too close to the....

Postby surenj on Sat Oct 09, 2010 10:05 pm

waves when you get soaked and the water dripping on your mouth tastes salty.... :roll:

We had a great time in Coogee this morning. The sun did get my email about rising and all that but the clouds had made other plans so had to leave the party before the sun arrived. No problemo; I am sure they will meet again without my invitation. :mrgreen:

For your comments etc...

Hmm I wasn't that happy with the compos today.

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Re: You know when you are too close to the....

Postby wendellt on Sun Oct 10, 2010 12:15 am

the 3rd one is a stellar shot looks like another planet

how exactly do you get to do this so often at such early hours and how do you get to these remote places
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Postby Wink on Sun Oct 10, 2010 12:02 pm

#2 and #3 are my favourites.
I'd clone out the hand rail in #2. It's a little distracting.
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Postby DebT on Sun Oct 10, 2010 12:05 pm

all winners certainly worth the early morning
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Postby gstark on Sun Oct 10, 2010 12:27 pm

wendellt wrote: at such early hours


Just staying up all night is probably the best way.

and how do you get to these remote places


Coogee ... yes, very remote.

While I would grab the car and take the 10 minute drive down Birrell St, Bronte Rd and Arden St, others might catch the 372 bus from the city.
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Postby zafra52 on Sun Oct 10, 2010 6:01 pm

I, too, prefer the last one of the set.
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Re: You know when you are too close to the....

Postby biggerry on Sun Oct 10, 2010 7:40 pm

Nice work Suren, the first shows your dedication to gettign the shot - you get closer to that water than any of us! your filter is filthy in this shot, I assume this was just before you cleaned / swapped it out?

I like the second shot, great sihoeutting style there, as Wink mentioned, clone that handrail out, or at the worst, just remove that 'gleam' it really draws the eye. I gotta say, what a fine example of the human species is portrayed in that shot. :rotfl2: :rotfl2:

That third shot shows alot of potential imo, I think you could do better with the PP on it though. It lacks a bit of pop and I feel the colours and tones of the morning definitely had that 'pop'

here's my 3 minute version, looks pretty rough but I will blame the low res images :wink:

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Re: You know when you are too close to the....

Postby surenj on Sun Oct 10, 2010 8:18 pm

Thanks for everyone's comments.

I just got home to check these out on the desktop monitor. I was horrified! I think the laptop calibration must have been way off!! These look so desaturated and soft as well!! :roll:
Thanks for your edit Gerry, that looks much better. I suspect this shot was de-contrasted by a dirty (or slightly fogged) filter as I cleaned it with the solution just prior... I thought it dried pretty quickly but I may be wrong. Maybae I smeared seawater all over it.. :wink:

Thanks for pointing out the handrail which wasn't that obvious on the laptop! [I thought I just calibrated that damn thing. Perhaps it's acting up in that way too... I've had a lot of WIFI problems with it]

gstark wrote:Just staying up all night is probably the best way.

The other approach is to get to bed at 2230... :mrgreen:

wendellt wrote:how exactly do you get to do this so often at such early hours and how do you get to these remote places

Just drove about 5 minutes. [Woke up 0525 and STILL had a sit down coffee at home; got there by 0545] You wouldn't believe that there is still some people running around at this time.
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Re: You know when you are too close to the....

Postby biggerry on Sun Oct 10, 2010 8:51 pm

wendellt wrote:the 3rd one is a stellar shot looks like another planet

how exactly do you get to do this so often at such early hours and how do you get to these remote places


well, we do rock up to sunrise pretty often (the regulars have been doing one nearly weekly) - there is always a free ride if you wanna come along one morning :up:
(just not next weekend, cause I am outta town - but I am sure one of teh otehrs would happily help out)

gstark wrote:Coogee ... yes, very remote.

While I would grab the car and take the 10 minute drive down Birrell St, Bronte Rd and Arden St, others might catch the 372 bus from the city.


Gary, shame on you, would could have people fooled that this was remote :rotfl2:

That said, I have to say our Malabar sunrise certainly felt remote! :up:
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Postby Jenno on Sun Oct 10, 2010 8:57 pm

Ah Hah,!!

So the handrail does have an ending...but hidden.... Referring to Gerry's photo

As Gerry has commented, your filters are showing the traces of your battle with the sea...mustve copped the same wave that you did. Plenty of it flying around so was inevitable.

I like 2 and 3 out of the series due to a better composition. Did you manage to obtain a release from the model?
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Re: You know when you are too close to the....

Postby wendellt on Sun Oct 10, 2010 8:59 pm

I would like to come along only reason why I havnt done much of this is because I can't drive
Let alone wake up that early but I'll train myself you guys are getting great stuff
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Postby Mr Darcy on Sun Oct 10, 2010 11:29 pm

Hey Gerry. Isn't it time to get a bigger tripod?
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Re: You know when you are too close to the....

Postby biggerry on Mon Oct 11, 2010 1:53 pm

Mr Darcy wrote:Hey Gerry. Isn't it time to get a bigger tripod?


nope..its about time society realised that the population is gettign taller and designed things appropriately :rotfl2:

At the very least they could work with the 95th percentile man, that is at least closer to the real average now. On a side note do you know that aircraft seats and associated structure are only designed for a 77kg person? methinks the average person is no longer 77kg, maybe in china...

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Re: You know when you are too close to the....

Postby surenj on Tue Oct 12, 2010 11:57 am

:ot:
wendellt wrote:because I can't drive

You sure get around for someone who can't drive! I've heard that it's a nice skill to acquire... :wink:

biggerry wrote:On a side note do you know that aircraft seats and associated structure are only designed for a 77kg person?

I guess it's not just the weight, also the height... Perhaps the airplane food is designed for instant weight loss? :mrgreen:
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Postby aim54x on Tue Oct 12, 2010 8:38 pm

surenj wrote:
biggerry wrote:On a side note do you know that aircraft seats and associated structure are only designed for a 77kg person?

I guess it's not just the weight, also the height... Perhaps the airplane food is designed for instant weight loss? :mrgreen:
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