A few from my current gig

Got a thin skin? Then look elsewhere. Post a link to an image that you've made, and invite others to offer their critiques. Honesty is encouraged, but please be positive in your constructive criticism. Flaming and just plain nastiness will not be tolerated. Please note that this is not an area for you to showcase your images, nor is this a place for you to show-off where you have been. This is an area for you to post images so that you may share with us a technique that you have mastered, or are trying to master. Typically, no more than about four images should be posted in any one post or thread, and the maximum size of any side of any image should not exceed 950 px.

Moderators: Greg B, Nnnnsic, Geoff, Glen, gstark, Moderators

Forum rules
Please note that image critiquing is a matter of give and take: if you post images for critique, and you then expect to receive criticism, then it is also reasonable, fair and appropriate that, in return, you post your critique of the images of other members here as a matter of courtesy. So please do offer your critique of the images of others; your opinion is important, and will help everyone here enjoy their visit to far greater extent.

Also please note that, unless you state something to the contrary, other members might attempt to repost your image with their own post processing applied. We see this as an acceptable form of critique, but should you prefer that others not modify your work, this is perfectly ok, and you should state this, either within your post, or within your signature.

Images posted here should conform with the general forum guidelines. Image sizes should not exceed 950 pixels along the largest side (height or width) and typically no more than four images per post or thread.

Please also ensure that you have a meaningful location included in your profile. Please refer to the FAQ for details of what "meaningful" is.

A few from my current gig

Postby Raskill on Thu Nov 11, 2010 1:02 am

Hi folks,

Just thought I'd post a few images from my current gig, AcrossOz, which is about half done. A six week on the road job, through the centre of the country and around the bottom bit. Anyways, enough of that, here are my 4 favourite images so far (excuse any colour issues, these are done on the road, uncalibrated).

Image

Life on Mars... well Shark Bay, W.A., Lens is the Sigma 12-24, each tent has a LED light inside. About a 10 second exposure after sunset. Image is to show adventure and the Blackwolf tents (sponsors) in use.

Image

Light painting near Uluru. This image needs to be tidied up in PS before final use, but the basics are there. No nicities light a lighbox or anything, simply a bare LED worklight and long exposure. Writing backwards in the air is a bugger!!

Image

Waiting to cross Coopers Creek, shot through the front wheel of a Suzuki DR. Off camera flash triggered by PW in lower left of image, just visible. About 1/8 power for fill. Image to show bikes, but also the tired rider.

Image

This is probably one of my favourite images from the trip so far. 30 second exposure at Uluru, fantastic light from the milky way and light painting with the LED light to illuminate the bike. Image to try and show the adventure and remoteness aspect of the ride. Requires final clean up in PS.

Well, they are my 4 favourite images just now, at least the ones I can think of. I'll post a 'journey' post once I finish up in about 3 weeks. Thanks for looking and feel free to comment.

What a job, someone has to do it!!
:D
2x D700, 2x D2h, lenses, speedlights, studio, pelican cases, tripods, monopods, patridges, pear trees etc etc

http://www.awbphotos.com.au
User avatar
Raskill
Senior Member
 
Posts: 2161
Joined: Fri Jun 17, 2005 12:26 pm
Location: Rockley, near Bathurst, Home of Aussie Motorsport!

Re: A few from my current gig

Postby phillipb on Thu Nov 11, 2010 8:37 am

I agree with you, the last shot is a cracker, but the third is not far behind, great portrait. I can see why you light painted the letters on your second shot but personally I think the photo would have been much better without them.
__________
Phillip


**Nikon D7000**
User avatar
phillipb
Senior Member
 
Posts: 2599
Joined: Sat Aug 07, 2004 10:56 am
Location: Milperra (Sydney) **Nikon D7000**

Re: A few from my current gig

Postby gstark on Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:23 am

Alan,

These are all great, but to me, the last of them is the weakest. I think the bike is a bit overexposed, and to my eye it might probably have been better placed in the bottom rh corner. As you say, these haven't had much in the way of post, and so please take my comments on your WIP in context.

That said, I the first is brilliant, and should meet the sponsor's needs with room to spare, and the third is just a great composition and story, and executed to perfection.
g.
Gary Stark
Nikon, Canon, Bronica .... stuff
The people who want English to be the official language of the United States are uncomfortable with their leaders being fluent in it - US Pres. Bartlet
User avatar
gstark
Site Admin
 
Posts: 22918
Joined: Thu Aug 05, 2004 11:41 pm
Location: Bondi, NSW

Re: A few from my current gig

Postby xerubus on Thu Nov 11, 2010 9:34 am

Good stuff and looks like a great gig. The portrait of the rider is my pick... nicely framed and definitely portrays how hard the ride has been. :up:

cheers

Mark
http://www.markcrossphotography.com - A camera, glass, and some light.
User avatar
xerubus
Senior Member
 
Posts: 2740
Joined: Fri Oct 22, 2004 3:33 pm
Location: Nth Brisbane

Re: A few from my current gig

Postby barry on Thu Nov 11, 2010 12:17 pm

Hi Alan,

1 & 3 are the standouts both with great composition and originality.

In 4 it also seems like there are two shots, the sky being the first and the bike being the 2nd. Also maybe a bit more light on the front wheel would have help complete the picture of the bike.

Keep up the good work and enjoy the rest of the trip.
D700, 50 1.8, 14-24 2.8, 24-70 2.8, 70-200VR, 80-400VR, SB800 plus a lot of gadgets
User avatar
barry
Member
 
Posts: 475
Joined: Fri Apr 15, 2005 9:25 am
Location: Emu Plains NSW

Re: A few from my current gig

Postby aim54x on Thu Nov 11, 2010 8:05 pm

I like #1 and #3 for the same reasons already outlined.

It sounds like you have quite the gig for this one. I am sure it is hard work but at the same time I am sure you are having a blast as well!
Cameron
Nikon F/Nikon 1 | Hasselblad V/XPAN| Leica M/LTM |Sony α/FE/E/Maxxum/M42
Wishlist Nikkor 24/85 f/1.4| Fuji Natura Black
Scout-Images | Flickr | 365Project
User avatar
aim54x
Senior Member
 
Posts: 7305
Joined: Fri Feb 01, 2008 10:13 pm
Location: Penshurst, Sydney

Re: A few from my current gig

Postby surenj on Thu Nov 11, 2010 8:45 pm

#3 is a cracker. Would suit a two page spread with caption on the left upper! :cheers:

#1 it would have been nicer to see more detail on the bikes which can be fixed in post.
User avatar
surenj
Senior Member
 
Posts: 7197
Joined: Fri Sep 15, 2006 8:21 pm
Location: Artarmon NSW

Re: A few from my current gig

Postby wendellt on Thu Nov 11, 2010 10:59 pm

the 3rd one is awesome great job
i see creative flair in all the shots
Wendell Levi Teodoro
My Agents
Press - Getty Images
Creative Rep - T.I.D. FashionID, DBP Productions & The Nest Agency
My Book - Zeduce
User avatar
wendellt
Outstanding Member of the year (Don't try this at home.)
 
Posts: 4078
Joined: Sun Feb 20, 2005 10:04 am
Location: Dilettante Outside the City Walls, Sydney

Re: A few from my current gig

Postby biggerry on Fri Nov 12, 2010 6:59 pm

I think its mostly all been said, however here is my 2c worth.

The first image is a great idea and the illumination of the tents makes it come alive, compositionally though, I think taking a hundred paces backawards and recomposing to that the curved lines of the beach lead up to the main subject (in this case the tents) and have them smack in the middle rather than down in one corner. As it stands I look at the tents then head for the sky, maybe also a tighter crop might draw the eye in and hold it?

confused as mud? anyway this crop and a bit of extra light on the bike side of the image makes come alive a bit more for me. I think your colours are all good - from my uncalibrated end. As usual, if you object to your images being edited or reposted let me know and I will remove it.

Image


surenj wrote:#3 is a cracker. Would suit a two page spread with caption on the left upper!


:agree:

maybe on a spoke insection article? :up:
gerry's photography journey
No amount of processing will fix bad composition - trust me i have tried.
User avatar
biggerry
Senior Member
 
Posts: 5930
Joined: Tue May 13, 2008 12:40 am
Location: Under the flight path, Newtown, Sydney

Re: A few from my current gig

Postby colin_12 on Sun Nov 14, 2010 9:49 pm

Nice Raskill,
Waiting for the next installment. :up:
Regards Colin
Cameras, lenses and a lust for life
User avatar
colin_12
Senior Member
 
Posts: 1853
Joined: Thu Jan 04, 2007 7:10 pm
Location: Hazelbrook

Re: A few from my current gig

Postby surenj on Sun Nov 14, 2010 10:56 pm

 btw do you have any exif info for the last shot? :shock:
User avatar
surenj
Senior Member
 
Posts: 7197
Joined: Fri Sep 15, 2006 8:21 pm
Location: Artarmon NSW

Re: A few from my current gig

Postby Big V on Sun Nov 14, 2010 11:50 pm

loving the tent shot..
Canon
User avatar
Big V
Senior Member
 
Posts: 2301
Joined: Mon Apr 18, 2005 1:37 am
Location: Adelaide

Re: A few from my current gig

Postby ozimax on Mon Nov 15, 2010 8:45 am

Great photos Raskill, especially the last.

One thing I have always wanted to do was a desert run on motorcycle. Not sure if it will ever happen.

Ozi.
President, A.A.A.A.A (Australian Association Against Acronym Abuse)
Canon EOS R6, RF 24-105 F4, RF 70-200 F4, RF 35mm F1.8, RF 16mm F2.8
"And ye shall know the truth, and the truth shall make you free." (John 8:32)
User avatar
ozimax
Senior Member
 
Posts: 5289
Joined: Wed Jan 05, 2005 11:58 am
Location: Coffs Harbour, NSW

Re: A few from my current gig

Postby Jeff on Mon Nov 15, 2010 12:23 pm

Hi Mate
As all the previous folks have said these are great.
Hope the trip is going well .
Don't be shy and try and post some more ,so us mere mortals who have to keep the wheels of industry turning can get secondhand thrills from your excellent images.

Jeff
User avatar
Jeff
Senior Member
 
Posts: 726
Joined: Fri Apr 01, 2005 11:00 pm
Location: Terrey Hills

Re: A few from my current gig

Postby Willy wombat on Mon Nov 15, 2010 3:48 pm

Love #1 and #3

Nice work!
Steve (Nikon D200/D700)
My photography website http://wwphoto.redbubble.com/
My photo blog http://www.redbubble.com/people/wwphoto
Please feel free to offer any constructive criticism on my works
User avatar
Willy wombat
Senior Member
 
Posts: 2284
Joined: Mon Jun 20, 2005 10:47 pm
Location: Bentleigh, VIC Australia

Re: A few from my current gig

Postby Raskill on Tue Nov 16, 2010 11:05 pm

Thanks for all the feedback and comments folks, it's been a blast so far to say the least. (Image processing in a tent each night, and sleeping on a deflating air mattress is wearing thin though).

Exif info for the last shot is 12mm, 30 sec exposure, ISO 4000, F4.5. Bare LED worklight used to illuminate bike for about 3 seconds (quick light painting). I'm not happy with the bike just now, like Gary said, it's slightly overexposed, and will need to be fixed in post, but, it should turn out fine.

Gerry, no owrries editing the image, the bikes will be brought more out in the final copy also. We discussed it after the shot, and the client wanted the bikes more obvious, rather than just the tents, so it is an easy fix. :) Recomposong would have been difficult, I was half way up a beach dune, that was topped in dead dry timber, and only maybe 20 metres wide, so this was the only spot for the shot.

I have 8 weeks till image delivery after the final day, so y new monitors will be there waiting when I get back, and i'll have some final images to show you soon.

On a personal note, this site has done more for my photography than anywhere or any single person, so thanks folks!!
2x D700, 2x D2h, lenses, speedlights, studio, pelican cases, tripods, monopods, patridges, pear trees etc etc

http://www.awbphotos.com.au
User avatar
Raskill
Senior Member
 
Posts: 2161
Joined: Fri Jun 17, 2005 12:26 pm
Location: Rockley, near Bathurst, Home of Aussie Motorsport!


Return to Image Reviews and Critiques