The Subway Busker

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The Subway Busker

Postby Bob G on Thu Dec 30, 2010 8:03 pm

Did a little street photography in Brisbane yesterday.

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Re: The Subway Busker

Postby petermmc on Thu Dec 30, 2010 9:08 pm

I really like this photo Bob. Nice work. Almost hear the echo from here.

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Re: The Subway Busker

Postby Bob G on Sun Jan 02, 2011 9:57 am

Thanks for the comment
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Re: The Subway Busker

Postby zafra52 on Sun Jan 02, 2011 12:15 pm

I like portrait and the expression of the main subject, but
I find the poster somewhat distracting. I wonder if cropping
and cloning the rest of the poster out would enhance
the impact.

I am quite shy and I find taking photographs like the one
above embarrassing, do they mind? What would it be
a reasonable fee?
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Re: The Subway Busker

Postby gstark on Sun Jan 02, 2011 12:41 pm

Bob,

I'm torn between deciding whether the poster adds, or detracts, from this image.

The busker's expression is priceless and has been expertly captured.

But I think that I'd rather see the complete poster in this image, or not at all.

But no, I don't want to see it cloned out; rather, do you have a different image, shot from further around towards camera right, where you have a different PoV from which the image has been shot, thus excluding the poster completely?
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Re: The Subway Busker

Postby Reschsmooth on Sun Jan 02, 2011 9:43 pm

The portrait is awesome, it really captures the busker in his environment. To me, the poster, cut off, adds to the context of where he is. I wouldn't change it.
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Re: The Subway Busker

Postby Bob G on Mon Jan 03, 2011 8:44 am

zafra52 wrote:I like portrait and the expression of the main subject, but
I find the poster somewhat distracting. I wonder if cropping
and cloning the rest of the poster out would enhance
the impact.

I am quite shy and I find taking photographs like the one
above embarrassing, do they mind? What would it be
a reasonable fee?


This is not something I do regularly but what I did was gesture that I wanted to take a photo and got a positive response.
After taking the pic I throw a few coins in the hat, or in this instance, the guitar case.
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Re: The Subway Busker

Postby Bob G on Mon Jan 03, 2011 8:53 am

gstark wrote:Bob,

I'm torn between deciding whether the poster adds, or detracts, from this image.

The busker's expression is priceless and has been expertly captured.

But I think that I'd rather see the complete poster in this image, or not at all.

But no, I don't want to see it cloned out; rather, do you have a different image, shot from further around towards camera right, where you have a different PoV from which the image has been shot, thus excluding the poster completely?


Gary - short answer is no I don't have the angle you are after. It was an impromptu shot taken as we walked down the Central Station subway from the Sofitel Hotel to the City. It was a little awkward to shoot with the pedestrian traffic.

There seems to be two camps regard the advertising light box and this is the crop I chose. I like the juxtaposition between the busker's personality v. the advertising content.

I recently sold my 70-200 VR and upgrade to the VR11 and was giving it it's first outing.

My ideal shot would be taken in much closer with say a 35mm and more of the subway in the background.
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Re: The Subway Busker

Postby Bob G on Mon Jan 03, 2011 8:58 am

Reschsmooth wrote:The portrait is awesome, it really captures the busker in his environment. To me, the poster, cut off, adds to the context of where he is. I wouldn't change it.


Thanks -that's also the view I took when processing the image.

I see merit in other approaches also.
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Re: The Subway Busker

Postby gstark on Mon Jan 03, 2011 10:30 am

Bob G wrote:Gary - short answer is no I don't have the angle you are after. It was an impromptu shot taken as we walked down the Central Station subway from the Sofitel Hotel to the City. It was a little awkward to shoot with the pedestrian traffic.



Thanks, Bob.

That's always a part of the process that we need to undertake, of course, and the shot that you grab is always better than no shot at all; great work.
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Re: The Subway Busker

Postby zafra52 on Mon Jan 03, 2011 2:43 pm

Actually, the more I look at it; the less I mind
the poster as it adds context. It is a lovely
shot and it mentioned above the face tells the
story.
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