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Natures fireworks

Postby colin_12 on Sun Jan 02, 2011 4:10 pm

While I went to see our local fireworks I neglected to take a camera.
This is a first attempt at stacking short exposures to get startrails, had a clear night so I thiught why not?
Only about half hours worth of taking pics and 5mins in PS when I finally figured it out. :oops:
I even captured an aircraft and a shooting star. :wink:

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Re: Natures fireworks

Postby biggerry on Sun Jan 02, 2011 4:37 pm

Colin, that there is some cool stuff, nice work, not much from my end in terms of critique besides maybe leaving it for a few hours and gettign some more exposures might be the only thing to improve it.
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Re: Natures fireworks

Postby colin_12 on Sun Jan 02, 2011 7:40 pm

Yeah more time would be a major improvement, raining tonight though.
Just happy the first attempt actually came off.
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Re: Natures fireworks

Postby biggerry on Sun Jan 02, 2011 8:19 pm

colin_12 wrote:Just happy the first attempt actually came off.


first crack! I am impressed....
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Re: Natures fireworks

Postby surenj on Mon Jan 03, 2011 1:14 am

Colin you must live in an area without electricity because I can't see any light pollution in these. :wink: Or is it something to do with your technique? :cheers:

Did you use a blend mode to combine the pics?
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Re: Natures fireworks

Postby colin_12 on Mon Jan 03, 2011 8:20 am

Oh we have some electricity being frittered away at night up here too Surenj :wink:
I was actually a bit bummed with how much light I had to deal with at this spot, Queens Road at Lawson. I will travel more than a couple of minutes for my next go I think.
Yes I used the lighten blend in ps as suggested by one of our atronomers on the forum, worked well when I sorted it out.
The only technique was to sort out the interval timer before I left home and to use the tripod. I suppose laying on the warm ute bonnet watching the stars might count also as that takes some skill not to fall off :twisted:
It is not really that hard Gerry, just need to find the time, and as Surenj says lower light pollution.
I reckon it would work well over some of the lanscapes you are doing to add a different element totally.
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Re: Natures fireworks

Postby aim54x on Mon Jan 03, 2011 8:43 pm

I remember walking down Leura Mall after dark, and the Milky way really comes out very quickly as you move a few blocks away from the business end of Leura Mall.....maybe sublime point would be good on a cloudless night.....now I want to go shoot the Mts at night again!
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Re: Natures fireworks

Postby surenj on Tue Jan 04, 2011 12:25 am

This got me thinking.

Colin, perhaps you can organise a lightpainting/star gazing meet at some stage... Safari of the sorts?
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Re: Natures fireworks

Postby biggerry on Tue Jan 04, 2011 8:46 pm

colin_12 wrote:It is not really that hard Gerry, just need to find the time, and as Surenj says lower light pollution.
I reckon it would work well over some of the lanscapes you are doing to add a different element totally.


yeah thats a good idea - I have always wanted to try this, but living in sydney makes it a bit hard..

surenj wrote:This got me thinking.
Colin, perhaps you can organise a lightpainting/star gazing meet at some stage... Safari of the sorts?


thats a good idea - astro night Safari :up: :up:
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